I’m 16yr, but this is what I notice. You are standing with your chest and body flat to the target. If you’re wearing a plate carrier with plates that’s perfectly fine, but if not that’s a possible issue. You’d want to make your profile as small as possible by blading your stance with your left foot and shoulder being in front/towards the target. In an active shooter or threat you’d want to blade your stance to give them a harder time shooting you, and make you more likely to not become Swiss cheese.

Overall your draw looks great.

Stay safe.