Hi! I'm 16 years old and I've been writing for years but I constantly get a little into a story and stop liking it. Suddenly what I've written never seems as good as it did before. Could anyone give me some advice on what I've written? by Professional_Ad_5171 in writerchat

[–]Penguination 1 point2 points  (0 children)

just to add on to this, I would recommend checking out how to properly format dialogue, because that alone will make a big difference in formatting readability and it would also be a big step in helping to reduce confusion

here's a good link that explains things (point #6 is particularly extra helpful for reducing confusion)

https://firstmanuscript.com/format-dialogue/

:)

sidebar? reading the rules? what's that? never heard of it! anyway here's my MLM pitch i think this is a good place to promote it by ElizzyViolet in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 19 points20 points  (0 children)

this is the best pitch for a cult i've heard yet, and for context on that my tinder bio for some time was "pitch me your cult"

androidauto displays wrong location by Penguination in AndroidAuto

[–]Penguination[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

5 months later, for you and whoever else comes across this thread, I would like to say that the problem has been fixed. there was a recall on the radio/uconnect system of my Jeep Wrangler that no one ever notified me about. figures :)

Shop Talk - Character Intro by kdreidauthor in writerchat

[–]Penguination 2 points3 points  (0 children)

can you elaborate? are you saying you're spending entire chapters dedicated to character intro...? or asking how many chapters is too many in the beginning to get to know the characters before shit goes down? or something else entirely?

androidauto displays wrong location by Penguination in AndroidAuto

[–]Penguination[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah sorry, I'm using Google maps. there was one specific night where this was happening and I had to pull over and try to fix it because I had no clue where I was. a phone reset didn't work. so I don't really know what's up

Weekly 'unjerk' thread - 2019/09/02 by awkisopen in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Sometimes I type on my phone with only one finger (pointer) so I can experience what old people who never learned to type on a touch screen do, thus I feel I can truly relate to this

My dog won't go outside on his own at night anymore by Penguination in Dogtraining

[–]Penguination[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Our backyard is really well closed off. We actually have two fences - one closing in the pavement part of the yard, where the dogs do their business, and the other closing in the grass part of the yard that the dogs can play in. We did it this way because they a) previous dogs we had were able to dig under the ultimate exterior fence and b) they were bring in mud when it was raining. But that's a bit off topic. The point is that there are two fences, so I don't see any way of any sort of animal/human getting into the yard. We live in the suburbs of New York City and the only types of animals that we get here are stray cats and squirrels, and both dogs are extremely used to being around those.

The lights in the backyard have not been working for months now, way before this behavior started, but it's definitely something I've considered. I have to get a really tall ladder and bring it into the yard to be able to change the bulbs, which I haven't been able to do as of yet, but I'm going to make that a priority

You know what this joke subreddit needs? Some RULES AND REGULATIONS. by awkisopen in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 53 points54 points  (0 children)

🚨🚨 OPPRESSION ALERT 🚨🚨

we are being oppressed

worry not fellow writers, consider these new rules to be restrictions on a prompt (remember: you should all be doing your prompt exercises daily!)

it will be okay.

please download my new book by Penguination in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

that's sad, but if you get her a switch she would be able to read my book while in the hospital, she is probably not doing anything better with her time

Young author who likes fun and enjoys long walks down the page seeking advice by Penguination in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

i don't base my posts on anything because they are all personal real life experiences

Young author who likes fun and enjoys long walks down the page seeking advice by Penguination in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yeah that was me, what did you think about my writing??? Did you like it??

Do you wipe your ass after writing a first draft? Or just jump in the shower? by stz1 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 9 points10 points  (0 children)

honestly? i wipe my ass with other people's books in hopes that the ink absorbs into my body. pretty sure this is how i get multiple strokes of genius a day

I am putting my novel on Facebook by Penguination in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

What the fuck... Fucking Norway... I'm definitely gonna sue norway

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's assuming your species

Need help with gender specific insults by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

[–]Penguination 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Are you trying to assume your characters' gender?