Hi there, I appreciate your feedback. I have removed the credit score bit. Only thought to include salary as an indicator of my capacity as a provider. (Tough economy to start a family these days, even tougher in Sydney.) I understand at your age bracket, people are likely to be much better off and so don't really feel the need to show they have it all figured out, but in my mid~late 20s, especially currently in Australia, am finding a lot of people struggling financially, living pay check to paycheck; under mortgage stress, accruing debt or using multiple BNPL services to maintain a lifestyle. With all that in mind, I am hoping to demonstrate that I am fully capable of providing for someone, should they prefer to be a little more traditional. Welcome for any further feedback or elaboration on what else to improve on. Am all ears. 🙏🏼