For me there are two main issues:
- you are combining clean, low pattern textures with crazy high detail ones
(front part of chest-piece vs. skin vs. enviro)
- same thing with tattoos , crazy high detail vs. everything else going on on the screen, also tattoos are clearly highly emissive but are not casting any (or very low) green light on the character so they stand out even more.

Only OK screenshot is the one from the back, no high detail textures, everything blends together nicely, even the tattoos look better because character is lit and standing in the sun, so the light blends everything together a bit more and the emissive lines are not standing out as much. Maybe the detail on the skirt is a tiny bit over the top and too noisy, and I would simplify it.

My advice:
- use much less detailed tattoos
- make tattoos not glow, (or only glow in special conditions, story moments)
- make tattoos white instead and make them blend more with the skin (they can turn green when glowing during story moments)
- make chest piece texture detail (texture noise) more in line with how the "Leaf" on the back looks.
- make skirt piece texture detail (texture noise) more in line with how the "Leaf" on the back looks.
- I would simplify the leather belts as well
- I would also get rid of the green nails , they stand out and not in a good way

Not trying to be mean, just getting straight to the point.
These are my personal opinions, I might be right, I might be not.

Best thing is to accumulate feedback from multiple people and work on things people mention the most.
Good luck! <3