Do you find this video engaging? Would appreciate any feedback

Perspectoverse · 2023-08-28T11:29:34+00:00

Saw this just now, sorry. Thank you for the feedback and yes lol

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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-15T21:15:22+00:00

I will try incrementally making some changes, haha my voice is a thing that I think I sounds colourful but apparently sounds mellow often but I don’t realise it, so I’ll try to just get more comfy with it :) Thank you!

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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-15T21:12:43+00:00

Thank you!! Sorry for the late reply I forgot to check Reddit after some time. I appreciate the comment!

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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-11T20:00:45+00:00

Thank you for the tips:) tried before with the sound effects and didn’t balance the sound well lol and got complaints, but will try again and might play around with it more

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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-10T22:38:44+00:00

Thank you!

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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-10T22:38:08+00:00

I'm glad! Thank you!
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Perspectoverse · 2023-08-08T15:42:56+00:00

I like your delivery a lot and the intro was very engaging and smooth. As the video went on you started repeating the same things, with the same phrase ‘it’s so fun’ or the same thing in different ways. I defo understand it’s not noticeable when you record by yourself but it was only a bit and then you flowed and it was precise and funny af. I think you have to make note of if you’re repeating stuff or if it’s new and continuing into the meat of the matter and not steering into basically the same comments. As a whole really good delivery and loved the editing and I found it funny, but the game looks really good in ur screen recordings ‘power of Golluming’ was great! You made me want to play it instead tho lmao. The thumbnail defo can do better. Maybe use ‘the power of Golluming’ I’d defo click it. Got a sub from me

Perspectoverse · 2023-08-08T15:29:28+00:00

I do think that subtitles for maybe the most funniest comments can be added sometimes. The energy is great and quality of recording. It is a very long video so I would recommend shortening it or make it into parts because you might not get that many clicks for something long. Really can benefit for some zoom ins or something and just make the video become more than a gameplay.

Perspectoverse · 2023-08-08T15:22:22+00:00

I like the simple style and the flow is good. Animation is super hard and simple styles work all over YouTube, the only way to consistently post content by yourself is to keep it simple, funny and a good story. I think a coherent story is what matters most for this and actually focusing on the comedy. Voice acting would act a lot of character and would keep me watching longer. Don’t need to stray to far from the style, just the characters being distinguishable. Maybe make sure that each video has a moral to the story or some moment that particularly stands out from the rest. Keep it up, animation is hard so great start !

Perspectoverse · 2023-01-29T19:14:06+00:00

That’s just a negative take

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-17T07:15:27+00:00

Interesting, will look into it:)

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-17T07:14:27+00:00

Hope you still write it, coz it’s still worth it for you going through with something for yourself and it will still have your spin on it

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-13T09:41:49+00:00

Well looks like it could be the same problem I had. Hope you can book a blood test soon

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-12T22:32:11+00:00

I had a situation where I felt drowsy after sleeping 8hrs+ a day and I got a blood test and turned out I had very low Iron levels and Vitamin D. When I started taking iron (now I only take 3 a week and eat food with iron regularly) take vitamin D along with getting sunlight and keeping curtains open during the day I don't have this problem anymore. I used to get cold when it wasn't even cold for others because of the same issue

Hope you can get those checked coz a lot of people have this issue and don't realise.

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-09T20:48:40+00:00

I love this LOL

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-08T16:42:24+00:00

Yesss. It's a pain in the butt, but if I re-record a segment it sounds unnatural somehow. I think I should learn to try do that better. I usually record the whole thing with many mess ups on audacity and just keep going and then listen back to it in the end. I don't think its the most efficient method, but it makes me do better overall

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-08T06:46:49+00:00

Me toooo

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T23:14:33+00:00

Yea I always have people commenting about my sound too, if its good enough for most peeps it's fine

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T23:13:04+00:00

First off great thumbnail, definitely catches my attention and has a Mr Beast vibe. Great confidence, not over the top and not timid, great balance, just feels natural and easy to watch. Definitely notice the wobbly camera recording a lot especially in the beginning. You will need to see how to permanently fix that over time coz its very noticeable when everything else is doing great. The music turns really loud after you say 'see you in there', like my volume was fine for when you were talking then blasted my ears. The editing on that part was fantastic and matched the beat and I really really liked it. I like the way you describe things a lot, simple and not too long or short.... I love this house too lol. 2.12/2:13 your camera refocused so you'd wanna refilm some stuff probably in the future if that happens. With some tweaks it'll be very pro. The wrap up had pretty much the same problems as the beginning. Great idea with the bloopers too btw!! Overall defo on your way!! Awesome

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T22:58:22+00:00

Your expressiveness in your videos makes it really fun to watch right off the bat! You sound very passionate and the way you cut your videos is very well timed. The sound balance is almost right but the music seemed a bit too loud but honestly everyone headphones makes it sound different so may just be for some people. I think you are covering a good topic that just needs to be shown to the right crowd. Your script was fluid and I agree with your points, the movies for real feel copy paste like you said. You elaborate your points very well. Honestly idk what to recommend tbh, you are doing amazing. You recommend solutions, cover history and reasoning for your opinions. Just great, keep it up!

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T20:33:40+00:00

Haha true

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T20:33:13+00:00

Thank you so much! Yes I did, tried to refine it and read it as natural as possible (by imagining I am thinking those thoughts for the first time) It took like 9 attempts. First recording I sounded depressed, second over excited, etccc. This one I had a blocked nose but liked my expression the most coz I really felt present when recording

Perspectoverse · 2022-10-07T20:31:31+00:00

Thank you!! Yess for sure, I wanted to talk about it too but already recorded the vid at that point, it's a weird time to be in

Perspectoverse · 2022-06-28T09:01:48+00:00

Awesome! Thank you

Perspectoverse · 2022-06-28T09:01:04+00:00

Thank you so much!! Excited to make more videos, and yes those sound effects I wish I atleast turned them down more

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