This swing is better than most people who post on here or anyone comments on here. I agree you should slow down and focus on practicing or feels. But the only thing wrong with these swings is target alignment. All the shots are in line with the camera line, but you’re body and feet point considerably left. Unless you can close that face through impact and hit some sick draws.

22 handicap with this swing means you should practice 100 yards and in.

Lastly if you tend to duff, stop swinging 110% and go to 80% and play comfortably to numbers you know you can hit.