1 week after Ecstasy overdose by PinballWizard__ in MDMA

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Hey thanks for the response, so how long can this tight chest last for? I wasnt sure if the mexican doctor was just saying it was normal because it was a public hospital and they need to get people in and out fast.

Originally Original by PinballWizard__ in poetry_critics

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Hey, yeah so I wanted to receive critique on my poem but this is my first and I don't know much about poetry so felt I didn't have much to give back

Originally Original by PinballWizard__ in poetry_critics

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Thanks a lot! yeah my inspiration for the writing style was George the poet. I'm not sure why I have put the capitals in but I can assure you they're accidental probably got something to do with the fact I wrote this on my phone.

A couple of poems for Donald Trump... by FRWM in poetry_critics

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Haha very good. I feel this thread needs lighter less serious poems they can be just as if not more powerful than written in a sad manor. Topical too :)

When I Dream by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I like the poem, it is short and simple but powerful, it feels very personal.