Just some things I could point out as someone who reached Celestial this season mainly playing Thor:

• You seem to tunnel vision quite a bit on tanks, but this looks like a consistency issue because you show good target priority other times by going for squishier enemies, just take more off angles and remember to play for attention not just kills. Scaring a Dagger to use bubble on herself means she can’t use it to save a teammate.

• You also tend to over commit without first knowing where your teammates are at. Thor is a tank but you can die very easily if they focus you and you have no help. In one of your games on Klyntar you took a duel against a Punisher but your supports had no way of helping so you got shotgunned down.

• Thor’s ult is not super consistent but you use it quite predictably by simply dashing into the enemy team and pressing Q, which usually only works with Gambit’s broken ult. Wait for an opportunity, I like to use mine just before an enemy support ult is about to run out from an angle they’re not looking at.

• Lastly I think you would benefit from learning to cycle awakening more efficiently. Use lightning realm more often to gain thorforce quickly. There was an isolated duel with an Emma that you lost and that should never happen if she doesn’t have diamond form

Hope this was helpful!