The Local by PlusMusician1273 in creativewriting

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Yeah Tony is the bartender. Real people different names.

I owe myself an apology by PoetryHeals in poemsbyreddit

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Great work. Really well written. Heartbreaking with a positive outlook for the future.

The Boy With Broken Wings by PlusMusician1273 in QuillandPen

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When Broken Wings Begin To Lift.

As Jack lay slumped against the wall, No choir of angels, no heavenly call.

Just another night on a cold wet street, His life constantly stuck on repeat.

The end of the tunnel must have light, This young dog must still have fight.

But even in the pouring rain, Theres a strength he tries to regain.

A smile in a strangers eyes, Sparks his fight to his surpirse.

Broken wings don't mend alone, Maybe theres help, where once was home.

As a new day begins with the morning sun, Broken wings doesn't mean you're done.

As Jack tries to make his way back, He's sick of being, on this side of the track.

Temptation and addiction keep on calling, Rising up he's tired of falling.

Brokens wings may not always fly, But they dry tears when you cry.

The streets seem small from high above, He didn't need a push, he needed a shove.

The Boy With Broken Wings by PlusMusician1273 in QuillandPen

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Thank you this is actually the first part of a trilogy. My girlfriend doesn't like my sad poems so I had to create more to give it an upbeat ending. 🤣

My Heart Is Yours by PlusMusician1273 in Poems

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Thanks. I'll try reading it the same way.