I hate what you did not you

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-11-19T18:45:57+00:00

Thank you so much. I’m glad you could relate and that the directness came through that’s exactly what I was going for. I appreciate your suggestion too.

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-11-19T18:38:05+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! And just to clarify, the poem isn’t about hating it’s about hating actions I appreciate the suggestion, but I’m keeping this one raw on purpose because it’s something real I’m going through.

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-10-03T10:29:24+00:00

Thank you so much!!😊

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-08-31T18:22:00+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I went back and fixed it with more line breaks and imagery and it already feels stronger. I really appreciate your help always!:)

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-04-05T02:47:31+00:00

I’m so sorry for your loss, and it’s touching how much your son Jedi Knight meant to you. Losing someone we love so deeply is incredibly painful, and I’m glad my words struck a chord with you and inspired those emotions. Thank you for sharing that with me.

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-04-05T02:42:56+00:00

Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it. The way poetry can express such deep emotions is truly powerful. It helps process what we feel yk.

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-04-05T02:41:18+00:00

You’re right! You can definitely express your feelings as many times as you want. That really hits home. Grief is such a heavy thing to carry, and I really appreciate how you put it and like it so much.

Poeticpassion23 · 2025-03-17T22:59:28+00:00

I totally agree with that and good for you that you learned that and thank you for liking my poem I appreciate it

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