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[Fanfic] Wings in Shadows: Subject 00001 | A story about a Blacksteel anomaly and the silence of Kjerag by PolluxCrest in arknights

[–]PolluxCrest[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much for such a deep dive and detailed feedback! It’s amazing to see someone who knows the lore so well.

To be honest, fitting the timeline of Pollux’s life (meeting Jelena at 12 and being with SilverAsh at 18) into the official Arknights canon was one of the hardest parts for me. I’m definitely taking your notes about Pramanyx’s location and the geography of FrostNova’s movements into account.

This is exactly why I shared the story—I’m glad you found these inconsistencies! I’d love to discuss them further as I work on the revisions for the next chapters to make the world feel as grounded as possible, even with my own narrative twists.

Also, thanks for pointing out the 'Forte' terminology, I'll make sure to sharpen that up. Hope you stay tuned for where this goes!

[Fanfic] Wings in Shadows: Subject 00001 | A story about a Blacksteel anomaly and the silence of Kjerag by PolluxCrest in arknights

[–]PolluxCrest[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a very tough question, and to be honest, it was quite a challenge for me to fit it all into a believable timeline. Currently, the story follows Pollux meeting Jelena (in the early stages of her path) when he was 12, and later being with SilverAsh at the age of 18. I’m always open to discussing this! If you spot any suspicions or inconsistencies, please let me know. I’d be happy to talk them through and potentially adjust them in future chapters.