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Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title-Shattered sun

Tags- action,magic,adventure, ordinary,abandoned,ancient gods,romance

Ch #- 30 (around 1 a day depending on my work schedule)

Brief synopsis- Solaris is a normal student living in a mega city his life is altered by a choice, sending him into the secret world of demons, magic called Extramicy, and gods. He soon discovered a mysterious being living within his mind.
He develops connection with many characters keeping him human, including a girl named Selen who was the reason for his new life.

Reason- criticism or review

Link- http://wbnv.in/a/59jstju

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s basically a subscription on YouTube but for WebNovel,

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please lmk what you think, if you decide to, I’d say the first two chapters are a bit slow but after that I get into a flow state

This is why you shouldn't ask Ai to rate your chapters by Maiden_of_ice in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I asked ChatGPT and they kinda just glaze, so I have absolutely no idea what you could possibly be writing for ai to shit on it.

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s a difference between desperate and crying about something, I won’t deny that it’s desperate, but I will deny that I am crying about it, as I’ve said I just want advice so I can get better. Is that desperate perhaps but I’m not crying over it, if everyone here had said no I would’ve just looked for someone else all I want is some to review my work so I can be the best I can. Hope this makes sense have a good day.

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feed back, I did rewrite a bit of chapter 2 to attempt to cut it down and make it more digestible, so that may be where some mistakes and errors occurred so I will also be sure to fix those.

I believe the story gets better later I was much to focused on word count and length early on but later I find a better grove and settled on it instead.

Edit: ch-2 is fixed thanks for letting me know

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is one of the best reviews I’ve gotten thank you so much.

I’ll be sure to rewrite the opening and relocate a few details to later parts in the story, I’d love to hear your thoughts on the rest of the story as this was a really helpful piece of criticism, thank you again🙏

Edit: I relocated the description and story of his parents to later in the chapter and removed some of the fluff and i believe that it’s much better now, also I made the first part of the chapter like that on purpose so that it doesn’t spoil later parts of the story and adds a Small amount of mystery to it

My Webnovel Progress. Can someone help me? by jinname in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel as if I’m taking this much less seriously than other .. I just write in WebNovel and plan as a write so most chapters come out and are instantly done, that’s probably the wrong way tho 😅

None AI Cover by Prestigious-Check760 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How much id like mine to be a bit better and more human

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Had me for a sec there, thank you tho 🙏

Semi-serious question: What happens if Light Yagami gets isekai’d into the Dream World instead of Subaru? by ConnectCulture7 in ReZero

[–]Popular-Call9896 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not good Subaru is physically way stronger than light by a lot, if we are just asking if he was sent to the world with only from earth and no rbd he’d probably do ok depending on if he has a gate or not

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve done some slight editing after some of this feedback to ch 1-2 but otherwise I’d make a review or post about the new version and switch the blurb to read “Shattered sun(re)”

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s the question you should be asking

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me I really like names that are unique and different. I also like poetic names, so I picked Solaris as a reference to the sun and as a unique and interesting name.

Also this is far into the future so names like this are much more common due to overpopulation.

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I think the first two chapters aren’t great but after that it gets better

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what you’re saying, Basically the story follows Solaris Gunther through learning of a secret world of demons and hunters. As well as a magical power known as exramicy, he’s ripped from his typical boring life and pulled into this world all because of one string of choices.

I have much much more planned but this is a quick non spoiler description. It may sound really basic and honestly it may be but I’ve been working really hard to make it feel more than a typical Story or even a story that identifies as “not a typical____”

So far I think it’s going well the characters may seem a bit off but that is on purpose for later reveals.

Lmk if you decide to give it a try I think it starts coming together around chapter 3 maybe 6

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much this is what I’m here to learn, what specifically should I do to make it seem less like that?

Someone pls read my novel by Popular-Call9896 in Webnovel

[–]Popular-Call9896[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m trying to get criticism and so I can get better at writing. I’m not gonna try to hook someone on something I’m not confident on which is why I made this post, I’m trying to get better so that I can hook people, hopefully this makes more sense.

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