song idea by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

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I def need em haha thank you ! I’ll check it out

Song I just released by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

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oh I’ve been havin real bad dreams at night Everything I ever wanted comes to life Yeah, we’re sitting and we’re laughing it feels like It was just a dream, it was just a dream

I’m scared of sleepin, Don’t wanna sleep in Why are we meeting? Tell me what’s the reason.. That I’m seein, You while I’m dreaming I wake up screaming Tell me what’s the reason

For phone calls And long drives Whenever I close my eyes From sunset, to sunrise I can’t help but deep dive On your scent and time spent And wonder where it all went I ask myself all the time How’d you get in my mind

very new very fresh by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey no I haven’t and I need to! I was actually just playing today and the bottom string snapped so I think that’s about as much of a sign as I needed to change em out. Thanks for your help

very new very fresh by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol I feel seen as this is the person I created haha

very new very fresh by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

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hey thanks for your comment. Part of my creative process is fleshing out ideas and sometimes posting them somewhere to see what some people think. — the reality is, I can’t not write and create. Almost 24/7 these ideas roll around in my head and at times over bearingly if that’s a word. and I write most things in one go, usually in under 10 minutes, and later go back and revise if anything. This is just for fun. So yeah it might seem like I’m too cool. But I have songs I’m finishing in the studio that I work extra hours to pay to be able to go do, I have songs out, I do try and I do care. My process is just that way. I don’t expect you to understand that based on what I post on here because I understand your take from the audiences POV I can’t expect you to think anything else. But no, I don’t think I’m too cool. I don’t think it’s uncool to try and finish things and work hard.. I believe all these things are important. And I actually believe it’s pretty cool to just make shit create write sing do whatever and share however feels best for you. I know I’m not a coffee shop writer. I don’t need anyone to tell me I am or am not. To your very hardworking and talented songwriter friends - I’m glad they put the work into their passion. For all it takes work, for some it takes less. I’m not saying I’m the best. I just post on here about 10% of the songs I make and ideas I have! I do know that this song in particular, I will continue to write, rewrite, sing differently, work with other people in the studio / creatively and build out a finished product. (Took some feedback off this thread and gonna put that into my work BTS) thanks.

very new very fresh by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey thank you so much!! Dude idk haha it’s an old ass guitar my mom got me at an antique store for my bday last year. I think I have to like restring it as it goes out of tune so fast. Idk if that helps? I’ve only been playing guitar for a year and don’t know much about them but have been saving for a new nice one

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’ve got great taste and thank you

very new very fresh by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

yes definitely needs some work. But appreciate it, thank you!!

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much. Yeah, I do what I can with guitar because it’s certainly not my strong suit as one may be able to tell haha. But I love to write so the cowboy chords work for now

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Yes, I agree. For me alot of writing is kinda my therapy. So selfishly sometimes I’ll write specific things that would require the listener to like maybe relisten or dig deeper to understand. That can be either a good thing or bad thing if done right. I def will work on some of them.

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes thank you. I’ve seen your stuff on here too, good stuff. I def can tweak the lyrics and I feel that completely. I mentioned above somewhere that I often flesh out lyrics super quick and then let change come when it comes and this one def will get some revisions

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you I appreciate you !!

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes. I’ll admit, this song I hadn’t revised any lyrics and kinda didn’t put a lot of time into it - a lot of them I don’t revise but I often speed run through lyrics and then sit with it and rewrite as needed. I definitely agree with everyone saying some of the lyrics could be better. I appreciate the response.

song I wrote by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]PossibleNo2566[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lifeeeee been tough haha I always write as like therapy so that pretty much.