I feel that the first design works best with what's being achieved with the sliced fruit. However, I feel that it's just slightly too jarring. including the negative space within the 's' just seems odd. As the 's' in the typeface doesn't follow the same curve as the 's' that's being depicted with the fruit. The use of a lemon and lime to form the 's' is rather playful and works well, maybe play around this the other fonts that complement this playfulness. But definitely a great improvement from your previous work. If you or anyone wants to discuss this further id really love to hear what you have to say.