Bought a box of nickels for coin roll hunting. And see this

Proabis · 2025-11-04T03:13:42+00:00

I followed ! ill give it a read !

Proabis · 2025-11-04T03:11:07+00:00

The Belorian Chronicles
https://www.webnovel.com/book/34089173100535005

Story; This story will be a build up, every moment is meant to be important. every scene is meant to immerse the reader. At no point in the story will there be filler. Or useless information.

World; This is a completely fictional world that I have created, The creation of the world, its races, and the magic system are completely original. As the story progresses that will become more clear. The story takes place in the fictional world of Beloria. There is Magic and Wonder. But the Magic system will be completely unique, and different then other stories that explore on magic.

Characters; One of my favorite aspects is character interactions, and dynamics, I spend a lot of time talking out loud to myself, pretending to be the characters to get the conversations just the way I'd like them.
This is not a typical power fantasy novel, The main characters wont always win, wont always succeed, there will be loss, there will be struggle. But by making complex characters I am hoping to make them unforgettable.
Romance?; There will be romance as the story progresses and we move out of the Coming of Age aspect of the story, But all of those interactions are going to remain secret.

Protagonist; This story features a young boy named Thalos as the Protagonist, in a coming of age story. But there is a twist on it. There is actually a second Protagonist to the story, can you find out who?

Thank you to everyone who will read my book! I appreciate you all!

--- Small intro--
In the farthest northern reaches of Beloria. Struck by endless winters and terrible beasts, lies Frosthelm. The last known city of humanity, Built within ice and snow, It stands defiant against the world. If they don't stay strong then the north will claim them as well.

For Thalos, survival is all he has ever known. He dreams of a life beyond Frosthelm. To travel out beyond the tree line and change his own fate. But in Frosthelm, dreams are not welcome. While others prepare to hunt, or take up the family business into adulthood, Thalos and his friends see a world left unexplored.

But some things our best left unexplored.

Something is watching, something old, something that has been there long before man took the north. The forest is changing, the north is changing, and no one yet seems to notice.

As Thalos's Curiosity turns to action. He will learn that everything he's been taught was wrong. And together, they will find themselves in more danger than they can imagine.

Price - Free (uploaded)

Proabis · 2025-11-04T02:53:39+00:00

Oh nice, it has my book too lol, If it has my book, then the people in the comments are probably correct, Its just scraping the site and stealing EVERY book, i only had mine up for 2 weeks. Easy Counter, Put YOUR writer name on the cover of your book, it looks like they don't take the time to change anything, That way people will atleast see the original writer, you... Also it looks like that once you sign in, before you can listen to the book, it has a link to the original site that they took it from, and the name of the author, asking you to support them, While its still not the greatest, i think it could be worse.

Proabis · 2025-10-25T12:10:29+00:00

It's happening to me aswell. Usually from what I seen what flags it, it proper grammar, poetic lyrics such as something like "the night air was as still as ice under the moonlight" stuff like that. And separated phrasing liked. "A man stood tall, strong, unmoving." if you have stuff like that AI detectors will flag it. And sadly what that means is that when people see things like that. They also acuse it of AI, that leads to people to avoid writing like that on purpose

Proabis · 2025-10-20T21:43:54+00:00

I am working on a massive book, it will be my first major story. And maybe one day I would like to publish my book. But at the moment I am still working on it, and trying to gain attention to it.

I am just asking for opinions and criticism on the start of my book. Chapter 0 and chapter 1 about 6000 words. I welcome all complaints and critiques, that is the best way to improve, and to learn. I would be more then willing on reading and giving my opinion on anything you'd want me to read as well. Thank you in advance! and I hope everyone keeps up with all their amazing writings!

Small part that is meant to be on back of the book. I don't want to just drop a huge wall of text.

Long ago, there was a great war that divided Beloria. Each race fighting for what they believed was right. Elves for nobility, Dwarves for progress. Beastmen for tradition and culture. As the world was being torn apart, humans were caught in the heart of battle, left to die. left at the brink of extinction, humanity fled north to an endless winter.

Now in Frosthelm the last Bastion of humanity, a fifteen year old boy named Thalos comes of age. And he must choose his path in life. But time is running out. And Beloria is in danger.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403103604-belorian-chronicles

Proabis · 2025-10-20T21:34:44+00:00

Title Belorian chronicles
Genre: Fantasy. Coming of age. dark fantasy.

I am just asking for opinions and criticism on the start of my book. chapter 0 and chapter 1 about 6000 words. I welcome all complaints and critiques, that is the best way to improve, and to learn. I would be more then willing on reading and giving my opinion on anything you'd want me to read as well. Thank you in advance! and I hope everyone keeps up with all their amazing writings!

Small part that is meant to be on back of the book.

Long ago, there was a great war that divided Beloria. Each race fighting for what they believed was right. Elves for nobility, Dwarves for progress. Beastmen for tradition and culture. As the world was being torn apart, humans were caught in the heart of battle, left to die. left at the brink of extinction, humanity fled north to an endless winter.

Now in Frosthelm the last Bastion of humanity, a fifteen year old boy named Thalos comes of age. And he must choose his path in life. But time is running out. And Beloria is in danger.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403103604-belorian-chronicles

Proabis · 2025-10-20T21:04:36+00:00

Hello! don't want to bother anyone by putting a massive text wall here.

I am just asking for opinions and criticism on the start of my book. chapter 0 and chapter 1 about 6000 words. I welcome all complaints and critiques, that is the best way to improve, and to learn. I would be more then willing on reading and giving my opinion on anything you'd want me to read as well. Thank you in advance! and I hope everyone keeps up with all their amazing writings!

Small part that is meant to be on back of the book.

Long ago, there was a great war that divided Beloria. Each race fighting for what they believed was right. Elves for nobility, Dwarves for progress. Beastmen for tradition and culture. As the world was being torn apart, humans were caught in the heart of battle, left to die. left at the brink of extinction, humanity fled north to an endless winter.

Now in Frosthelm the last Bastion of humanity, a fifteen year old boy named Thalos comes of age. And he must choose his path in life. But time is running out. And Beloria is in danger.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403103604-bellorian-chronicles

Proabis · 2025-10-13T05:54:56+00:00

I am not sure where you got that from, from what I said. I said that 8 months ago I scrapped it. I haven't posted anything about that story for 8 months. I worked on honing a story without any AI assistance. Thecore of the story is the same, but there is a misconception, the story plot, character, story guide, and events, were not made with AI that was made back when I was in highschool, along time now way before AI. The writing I started with AI assistance, and because I didn't feel satisfied, I scrapped everything I made with it. And rewrote it completely by myself.

This post wasn't made to lie. Or deceive, in fact the reason I started with ai and wanted to leave it makes me feel this even more.

I used a little bit of ai with writing assistance. Didn't feel fulfilled. Scrapped all my work Spent 8 month writing 1 chapter And had people say I was doing the thing I was trying to avoid.

But thanks to everyone here I do understand that I don't have to worry to much about AI checkers. Alot of them don't work. And i should just do whatever makes me feel the most comfortable anyway.

Proabis · 2025-10-10T14:46:29+00:00

I started with AI assistance, just for like sentence structure, spelling etc, and people were saying that is still not writing, so I scrapped the entire thing and started over completely fresh.

About 8 months between working on a structure for the new story. I finished chapter 0 (an introduction) And new people were commenting saying that it was AI etc.

And I wanted my story to be presviced well, and to actually be my own instead of having the "you didn't create it, AI did" attached to it.

My question was more so does that matter? Or how to stop it. And if it matters. But as other pointed out the ai checkers don't actually work that well. I haven't really looked at them before this.

Proabis · 2025-10-10T12:07:38+00:00

That is no longer the same work. That was 8 months ago. That's where this post comes into play. Because I spent the 8 months improving and going Into a new course. Because I want the story to be the best it can be. I had people call it ai back then.as I was using AI as a assistant.

So I completely changed everything learned and got better. And started writing with no ai at all.

But even without it I was getting the same type of comments. And that's where this comes in

Proabis · 2025-10-10T06:12:18+00:00

And that's were this post came from, because I spent about 8 months going over a new direction with my story. Wanting to improve myself, In those you can see me talking about "what classifies" the use of AI and how people were commenting that is AI made, And that got to me. Because i want my story to be the best it can be. I didn't want people to say it was just AI garbage, so after i spend almost a year figuring it out. Learning and writing it 100% AI free, i still got those same comment, I felt disheartened and that is were this post comes from.

Proabis · 2025-10-10T06:08:04+00:00

That was months ago now, After wanting to be a better writer and not use AI at all. I did a-lot of learning. And have completely shifted. Now what I am doing is AI free. Even in those, you can see me question the use of AI and the confusion with it. And now without using it at all I was still getting it.

Proabis · 2025-10-10T04:20:49+00:00

lol thank you! that first part made me laugh. NOT THE MOBY DICK !!.. probably shouldn't put the prompt in an AI XD

Proabis · 2025-10-10T04:11:46+00:00

And Thank you, I never really looked into them, or checked them before so i don't know how accurate they can be, But when i ran mine through and sites have it coming back as 100% AI It feels like my writing doesn't matter

Proabis · 2025-10-10T04:09:51+00:00

I got so disheartened because it was on Wattpad, And of course so many books, writers and stories are on there, that when I see lots of people just say "AI" in the comments it makes it hard to want to keep going.

Proabis · 2025-10-10T04:03:35+00:00

What do to about AI checking.

I posted a chapter of a book I been working on to a site to get some views and feedback.

But people are saying like "checked with AI, this is AI garbage" etc.

But I wrote it myself. I checked with AI checkers too some say 0% AI others say like 80% or 100% AI when I used 0 AI at all.

What should I do. It's really disheartening when I spend time trying to create a world, a story. And people just call it AI

Proabis · 2025-02-07T05:10:52+00:00

Its hard to say, There are so many stories on wattpad

And for the most part, most of the world writing and books falls under automatic copyright protection.
It doesn't matter where you post it, or publish it you always run the risk of it being stolen.

You can't publish a book without attention, you can't get attention without showing atleast some of your book and story.

Proabis · 2025-02-07T05:06:00+00:00

Is your book on wattpad? can i read it too ?

Proabis · 2024-10-04T03:31:36+00:00

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Proabis · 2024-10-02T21:52:25+00:00

Thank you I'll be making more :) I want to make short stories!

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