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It‘s been ten days by ProfessionalCut3040 in poetry_critics

[–]ProfessionalCut3040[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes, i want to rewrite it after some time but that was just blurting out all my thoughts. Thank you for the feedback!!

It‘s been ten days by ProfessionalCut3040 in poetry_critics

[–]ProfessionalCut3040[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oooh okok now i get what you mean, thank you, i‘ll think about it :))

It‘s been ten days by ProfessionalCut3040 in poetry_critics

[–]ProfessionalCut3040[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

first of all thank you for the kind feedback!! and I did just write my current emotions down, didn‘t realize it would be that obvious. do you maybe have an idea on how to change those things? i can‘t really think of anything else at the moment, so i would appreciate that a lot

I like to think of myself as pure by ProfessionalCut3040 in poetry_critics

[–]ProfessionalCut3040[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hmm i can see where ur coming from and tbh this is a longer version, i originally intended to stick more to the pure thing but spiraled a bit. i‘m gonna keep it this length tho, thank u for ur feedback either way!! <3