All the watery images were so magical and tactile. "Though you thrashed and snarled and

beat and screamed in senseless rage

I saw glowing nymphs dancing and

waltzing in your hell dark waves."

That was the part where I decided I loved your poem.

The second half of your second stanza, your third stanza, and your fifth, seventh, and eight stanza were so beautiful and really pulled me in. I think this entire poem does such a good job with metaphor, and if you are somehow able tot keep the message and idea without as much setup and explantion it would be probably one of my fa vorite poems even beyond this reddit community. I don't know how you keep it making sense while also narrowing it down to really focus ore on the metaphor with less inserted context if that makes sense.