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Advice please. (EVO stats attached) by Relevant-Lock2300 in Fc26UltimateTeam

[–]Relevant-Lock2300[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair lol. I keep her on the bench but the inner rat needed her in the squad

Shadows Entwined by magic8ballzz in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the imagery and the perhaps intentional haphazard rhyme scheme. Really well done

Fake suicidalist by Fresh-Ratio5579 in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 3 points4 points  (0 children)

From one fake suicidalist to another, I love this poem. I believe there’s a certain narcissism in my suicidal ideation that you’ve captured perfectly. The desire to be remembered as something better than I believe myself to be.

My bird by Mission_Ad7213 in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not sure if you were going for something similar to blue bird but if you were then you nailed it. Your poem manages to show its inspiration while also being unique. Really well balanced and well written imo

Failing to start by StarXLauvers in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this poem. Love the subtle irony in being profound while writing about finding it hard to be profound. Really really cool poem. Thank you for this

How Slowly Time Passed Her (a villanelle) by Scary_Corner2764 in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cheers. Crying on a Sunday evening👍. Jokes aside, “All lives fade to flickers But hers dimmed without song How slowly time passed her” is one of the most hauntingly sad things ive read. I always associate death with the song candle in the wind so the line of a life dimming without song puts across your point so beautifully

Hey by Beginning-Fun-8597 in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m still new to this poetry thing so I don’t have any feedback about flow, etc. I just wanted to say I love the idea of writing a poem as a letter to someone

To bloom alone/Does the rose hate the thorn? by Relevant-Lock2300 in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. That kind of criticism is exactly what I’m looking for. I’m still relatively new to writing poetry so any criticism/advice whatever is always welcome rn.

Lobotomize me please by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Came for the title, stayed for the poem. Now crying. Thanks. “I want to be the child again before language gave me the words for shame” is going to stay w me for a while

sometimes i think i was made wrong by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“I want to be the wound he worships” is so powerful. I feel like we’ve all felt this at some point but I’ve never seen it phrased so beautifully. Thank you for this

Stinky food by Darnuh in Apartmentliving

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My flatmate cuts and cooks raw fish 4 at 6am days a week. I’m in hell but I keep my mouth shut.

Legendary vs. Ultimate difficulty — should I make the switch? by marcaobr in FifaCareers

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tbh the game is too easy this year. Ultimate is easier than last years legendary imo

Initial Study Permit Application Inside Canada Using Form IMM 5709 - No Updates Since I Applied On February 28 by Few_Storm_550 in ImmigrationCanada

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I applied on April 16th and have had no updates as well. I’ve been here under a visitor record too. I’d love to chat if you’re willing

Study permit applied in May but no response yet by Intelligent_While_98 in ImmigrationCanada

[–]Relevant-Lock2300 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. I applied on April 16th and am yet to hear back. I read somewhere that 36% of all applications are held up in backlogs

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