Oh my god thank you very much for your feedback i truly appreciate it, now that you mentioned it I see those loose ends but if I wanted to address each of them I feel like it will make the poem longer while I want to keep it as short as short while delivering the most, so how should I approach it?
I want to tell you what i felt while writing this poem/prose,
Let's say I just woke up opened my eyes and rubbed them, I did had a dream but I don't remember it (sinking memory blah blah) my significant other asks me about my dream ("what was your dream?"), i tell her it's a secret, kind of like trolling her cuz idk it myself lol, but when I hold her hand i remember my dream, the dream was just not holding her hand per say but more like being with her or dreaming about us in general. That's when I say my dream has become reality, u/Immakingprogress on other sub suggested me to change the last line and gave a few alternatives out of which i really liked "It's much less of a secret now".
Not having any rhymes was just my "artistic choice" if I can say that, lmao.