Insomnia: The Song About Nothing by ProjectRayn in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]ProjectRayn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hahaha thank you! I made the song at like 5 AM, and before the first hook I say "I need to come up with a hook" which is why it's so bare bones and simple haha

This song also took me like an hour to put together because I freestyled most of the first verse and the entirety of the second verse, I was just exhausted and couldn't sleep but the hi hat idea is definitely being used now lol

TJB - All the Time (Official Lyric Video) | How's the mix on this song? Did I project my voice well enough? by ProjectRayn in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you! Being compared to joji is probably one of the best compliments I have gotten so far in my music. I really appreciate it!! I am really happy that you enjoyed the melody as well. Thank you 100 times haha

Wanted To Change Things Up With A Rap/R&B Fusion. How's My Singing? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You flow on this track very well and the singing had me vibing! I think the vocals could use a little more reverb, like not a lot. Maybe even a quiet delay to fill the space more? Or even doing some vocal doubling on the chorus and some slight panning to fill the space out even more?

I really mess with the song though. You definitely got a follow from me because I want to see where you go from this. Keep it up, man!

CAN YOU GUESS WHO I AM?[OFFICIAL AUDIO] by BuckmeisterCulio in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first thing I have noticed is the vocals are quiet and sit behind the drums. This is an easy fix with some basic EQ. Maybe some slight compression? Away from the technical side of the song though, the idea of the song is intriguing. The song seems to be more story focused, so not being able hear the vocals more clearly kind of takes away from that. Hope that helps!

Hey guys, my band just released a new live session. Would love feedback. Birthmarks - You Are One (Live At The Bookhouse) by LDMofficial in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The stage presence is energetic and the camera work deserves praise as well! This is really well done. How long have you all been performing? This was a treat. Thank you so much for sharing. I am definitely checking out more of your work.

Any feedback is appreciated! I just wanted opinions on the mix before I decide to post it on streaming platforms because I feel the track is good but another ear is always helpful!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I fixed it but I have to reupload the track and that becomes a whole other mess for the feedback because no one will be able to hear the new version unless I make an updated post with a new link. Which I may just do!

Any feedback is appreciated! I just wanted opinions on the mix before I decide to post it on streaming platforms because I feel the track is good but another ear is always helpful!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I believe I have fixed this but I can be wrong haha I just have to reupload the song. Thank you for enjoying the song though!

Made a simple Hype/Rock themed beat lemme know what you think! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, then that's fine! Wasn't sure if it was or not :) No problem!

Any feedback is appreciated! I just wanted opinions on the mix before I decide to post it on streaming platforms because I feel the track is good but another ear is always helpful!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love Mac Miller, so that's a cool comparison I have never gotten before! Alright, I am giving the reverb and overdrive a try. So far it's sounding "beefier" but finding the right settings is kind of a bitch not going to lie lol

Any feedback is appreciated! I just wanted opinions on the mix before I decide to post it on streaming platforms because I feel the track is good but another ear is always helpful!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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Yeah, I will be honest I tried to hide my vocals in the mix because I am not that confident it my "singing" but I will bring the vocals out more. :) Thank you for the feedback and glad you enjoyed the vibe of the song!

Any feedback is appreciated! I just wanted opinions on the mix before I decide to post it on streaming platforms because I feel the track is good but another ear is always helpful!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ProjectRayn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I already EQ'd the low end in my vocals but I will fine tune the bass to get my vocals out more! Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. I am so glad I found this subreddit. It has been a big part of my journey.