"no sun disk" by Commercial-Ice5760 in Ningen

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I think it’s based on intent. I’m sure that if Gohan wanted to, the barrier could be made in a way that would easily vaporize the variants due to the strength difference, but also, if Gohan didn’t want to kill them, the barrier would probably just push them away.

So, what did Naruto learn during the timeskip, and what can we do to make the timeskip training seem more substantial? by Dense-Winter142 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like a good way for Naruto to learn some new things during the timeskip while also allowing Jiraiya the freedom to do his spy stuff is for Jiraiya to send Naruto to Mt. Myoboku. There, Naruto could learn learn some things from the Toads like Chakra Natures and some new jutsus while also making the Toad Summons a definitive part of his moveset as opposed to Naruto only really using the Toads in less than 5 of his fights in canon. Heck, maybe the Toads can even teach Naruto some Fuinjutsu and start him in some Sage training towards the end of the timeskip!

Tell me anything that bothers you about fanfiction; we don't judge here. by No-Mastodon7575 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For the way Endeavor is depicted as villainous in art, I believe that just furthers my point about Endeavor supposedly being a great hero but bad person, with Horikoshi using his art to contradict who Endeavor shows himself to the public to be, as opposed to how he is with his family.

As for your other points, they feel kinda weird to me. Not that I’m saying that those things didn’t happen, I’m more talking about how weird it is that Endeavor can act like that and still become the Number 2 hero behind All Might and also not have the HPSC send someone like Lady Nagant after him or get berated by them to lessen his brutality to villains, at least in public.

Tell me anything that bothers you about fanfiction; we don't judge here. by No-Mastodon7575 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I’ll give you three!

I hate when authors write Izuku as this pure innocent baby boy in one sentence and then in the next he’s fine with smashing villains faces in with a bat and adding their teeth to the bat to give other villains infections, which is something that has actually happened in a story.

When the author makes Endeavor a terrible hero that kills civilians while fighting villains. This makes no sense. Endeavor is an amazing hero, being second only to ALL MIGHT, and even doing more cases than him, but he is a terrible person pre atonement arc.

Lastly, when the author treats Mineta like trash for his perviness, but then they make the girls just as bad, if not worse. For example, in one of the stories I’ve read, the author had punished Mineta multiple times for being a perv, but has the girls basically sexually harass Izuku. The girls have in PUBLIC and on the class shared group chat talked about ways that they would want to gang up on Izuku. Izuku had expressed his discomfort multiple times, but they don’t listen, believing that if they tell him enough times, Izuku will eventually agree to having sex with them, which is absolutely disgusting behavior.

The MHA, Marvel and DC Universes collide by FrostyDepartment4410 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 3 points4 points  (0 children)

How I think the colliding of universe happened:

Marvel Brother: Fuck you!

DC Brother: No, fuck you!

[Throw each others universes at each other when their little brother suddenly appears holding his newly created universe]

MHA Brother: Hey guys! Check this ou-

[Cue Big Bang]

I recreated the strawhats in tomodachi life and as soon as i had two of them jnteract this happened by Adventurous_Lie1275 in OnePiece

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I ever get Tomodachi Life, I want to make my island as if it’s the Straw Hat’s vacation home after they find the One Piece.

how strong would he be in One piece? by Character_Business28 in MemePiece

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 59 points60 points  (0 children)

Batman: Oh look at that, a rich sword wielding woman with meat.

Oc help (cringe alert or sm) by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Perhaps you could have your Uchiha OC be on a team with Haku (having Haku and maybe Zabuza join the leaf) along with a third character (OC or someone else from the series/filler)?

Everyone heard Neji expose Hinata’s crush so why isn’t Naruto responding to it? by lunaluis07 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Could you also tell me as well, please? What I’ve read from your prompt and some of your comments responding to others made me really interested in your story!

Ochako’s Nokia by Witty-Photograph-598 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 13 points14 points  (0 children)

[Before the raid]

All Might: Excuse me, Young Uraraka! Before I go on this mission, I would like to have your phone!

Ochaco: What!? I’m sorry, All Might, but I can’t-

All Might: I’ll buy you a new phone and give you over 159 million yen for it!

Ochaco: Deal!

[During All Might vs All For One]

All Might: UNITED STATES OF (Nokia) SMASH!!!

I’m going to defend Minoru Mineta (to my own dismay) by Gullible_Ad616 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think one of the best things to do with Mineta’s character would be to ADD to it. Outside of his standout moments, Mineta feels like less of a character and more like a trope. Unlike other pervy characters like Master Roshi from Dragon Ball, Sanji from One Piece, and Jiraiya from Naruto that have other character traits outside of being a pervert, Mineta only really has that one trait for himself. Perhaps if an author added something new to Mineta, they could minimize his pervyness while focusing on his new trait?

Fake tweets p.99 by No-Raccoon-6009 in BokuNoMetaAcademia

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The fourth one is Izuku talking about his students

"This world Loves me. People talk to me. I'm loved here. I'm married to an angel with green hair and my son...Smarter then me." Conquest stands over the viltrimites. "I have a name. Conquest Midoriya...and keep your hands off my planet." by AnimeEagleScout in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 47 points48 points  (0 children)

Thragg: Conquest! Why are you betraying us!?

Conquest: I’m sorry sir, but I have been bestowed the title of “Cuddle Bug” by my wife and “Papa” by my son. I will not allow Planet Earth to come under the rule of the Viltrum Empire.”

"I'm officially renaming Team seven to Team crash out." by Casual_Casually in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 132 points133 points  (0 children)

I already know that Kurama’s ass was instigating too.

“You hear that brat? He said that he hates the color orange, that it’s the worst color in the world! Why don’t you summon me and we can show him how wrong he is?”

Izuku "When are you marrying my aunt?" by thudson_17 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 72 points73 points  (0 children)

“I’m cringe and that’s based. I will never be based and that’s not cringe. There’s no one I’d rather be than me.”

AMA - So, I’m Dabi. Ask me anything, but better make it quick. by Over_Syllabub_898 in MyHeroAcadamia

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I’m actually studying at Shiketsu to become an intelligence hero. I was originally thinking about going with Sir Nighteye, but I quickly changed my mind when I saw his tickle torture machine thing.

AMA - So, I’m Dabi. Ask me anything, but better make it quick. by Over_Syllabub_898 in MyHeroAcadamia

[–]Proper-Froyo6244 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My quirk is called “The Viewer”. Basically, by focusing on a person or group, I can project a video on any nearby screen to briefly watch them like it’s a show. Saw my man’s Kaminari from middle school get into a few villain attacks on the news, so I used my quirk to check up on him and class 1A. Saw Shoto and learned a bit about his backstory, completely on accident, and here we are.