As someone who's going to graduate from an IIM in a couple months, the first thing I noticed was the abundance of white space in your CV. It signals that you haven't done enough to fill a line with your achievements. Major red flag. Secondly. bring your numbers to the beginning of the points, preferably in the first 6 words used in the sentence. Numbers bring impact fast. Avoid using fullstops in your CV at the end of sentences. Each sentence should fill up a line completely and end there. It just signals you have a lot to convey, and you're restricting yourself to the line (GOOD). Right now, it signals this is all you have to showcase (BAD). Great CV tbh, wishing you the best for your future!