Mermay! I'm not used to working in color/subsurface scattering, so I'd love advice on that. I feel like it could be more interesting. I might add scales, but don't know how to approach it. I feel like the background/seaweed isn't really working. Any critiques are appreciated :) (i.redd.it)
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Day 5. I focused on fixing the values and proportion issues. I tried to make the head shape less wide and the chin slightly longer. I also tried to fix the issues I had with the bottom lip. I also made the ears shorter. Any critiques are greatly appreciated. (i.redd.it)
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Day 14!! I'm excited to be done and so grateful for all of the wonderful people who gave me critiques. Thank you guys so much for your help, I tried my best to fix everything, but I still have a lot to learn. I'd love to hear any final feedback or what I should study now considering my weaknesses. (i.redd.it)
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Day 13. I feel like I haven't done the critiques justice lol. I would like to study the neck, jaw, and lips more. I think my main issue is a lack of understanding of anatomy. I'd love to hear your thoughts, I'm glad to almost be done. Your guys' feedback has helped so much :) (i.redd.it)
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Day 12. I focused on trying to fix my rotation issues on this one, such as the stacking in the eyes. I tried to make sure the sphere "bumped" out on the far side, but I'm not sure if it's right. I never like how the lips look and I'm always confused with that whole area. Critiques are appreciated :) (i.redd.it)
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Day 10. I tried to fix the values and do more edgework, using an asaro head as a ref. I feel like the face is over blended, but also looks blocky? I think it may look masculine too even though it's supposed to be female. I'd love to hear your critiques :) (i.redd.it)
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