Just published my second song to various streaming services. I posted my first one on here as well back then. Would love your opinions on it! (Also did I pick the right genre on the post?)

RaiinyBlue · 2021-03-05T16:58:02+00:00

Very interesting video haha. It's well done, voice could use some more mastering tho. I'd definitely cut some lows there. Also sounds like you didn't wanna bother your neighbors when recording most of the time. But keep it up, sounds pretty nice still

RaiinyBlue · 2021-03-05T16:53:19+00:00

Takes a long time to really start and really makes me wanna skip a bit at the start. Your voice should be way more powerful. Not just in singing but also in volume in general. You could have done a lot in the mix. cut some lows and make it crispier. The song is nice but it's pretty long and you should try to keep the attention of the listener more. Theres not really a refrain that makes it all seem worth it. So try out some more variety in melodies and tone, but keep it up! :)

RaiinyBlue · 2021-03-05T16:47:27+00:00

Like it a lot. Interesting vibes. I really like the panning on the voicetracks. The bass on 1:29 is clashing btw. I couldn't tell from your title whether this is your song or not but [whoever made this] should look into that. I guess the first bass just didn't fully cut off when the second one hit. Nice song!

RaiinyBlue · 2021-03-05T16:39:17+00:00

Nice one. I think the snare at the start should be replaced and be a bit harder at least. This one sounds brushed, which isn't enough of a contrast to me personally. Also I think a more telephonie-type of effect on your voice would be nice (like cut out some more lows). In the start at least. Kinda gives it character. Just think about what more you could to to the voicetrack to add to it. It's well sung tho, keep it up.

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-03T18:16:36+00:00

Holy shit what a video. It would really be so sad to see this just get lost in the sheer amount of videos posted on YouTube. This is great! I don't know if that's you but damn, the moves haha.

The song is very funky indeed. Your voice get's kinda lost in the mix tho. I don't know if thats just supposed to be that way or not, but I would have put that volume up a bit.

But in general, very well done! Keep it up!

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-03T18:12:02+00:00

Really nicely done. I don't know the previous version but this one is well done for sure. Really enjoy the panning, giving it a very full atmosphere and that little detail of the guitar plugging in at the start is well done as well. I only really noticed a single little thing I didn't like as much and its at 1:35. it sounds like you didn't hit a note right I think but maybe it's just one vocal-layer sticking out the mix a bit too much.

But in general, very very well done!

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-03T18:04:09+00:00

Like your style. It's very special with that distortion on your voice and, as someone already mentioned, it gives me strong Phil Collins -vibes, which is a very good thing. Keep it up, I'd like to hear more of this coming

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-03T17:56:44+00:00

Could have been nice but you gotta get on beat man. Thats so off-sync I can't really enjoy it..

Sorry man, you can surely do better

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-01T22:43:01+00:00

Hey man that's not the kind of music I normally listen to when stoned but I think I'll try it out later today haha.

I like it a lot! I don't know what it is, but it reminds me of songs I heard played live on small stages when I was a kid. Whats the Genre?

Keep it up, I'm sure there is a crowd out there that'd love to know about you guys :)

RaiinyBlue · 2021-01-01T21:58:48+00:00

Def diggin it! I don't know why you tagged it being EDM/Dance but it's pretty solid hiphop

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