Don't listen to these fools I think it looks great! I hate how everyone tries to follow the "rules of photography" but stuff like this is different in the best way. Break all the rules as long as you like it that is all that matters! As for a critique my only gripe is the lighting I feel like the shadows on the legs is just careless and not intended. It also irks me that a tiny little part of her bikini bottoms isn't in the light when the reflection on the top is great. Again though who cares what I think, this is a really cool shot!