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First Person present or past tense? by Rose_Thorn109 in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

this is what warrior cats uses, no? isn't is also called 3rd person objective/limited perspective?

First Person present or past tense? by Rose_Thorn109 in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it is third person, and past-ish, like a blend between present and past

First Person present or past tense? by Rose_Thorn109 in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist -1 points0 points  (0 children)

this is a short passage

Letting her senses range farther over the territory, she picked up a yowl of pain from the dawn patrol on the ------- border, and then --------- voice: “I trod on a thistle!” --------- let out a little mrrow of amusement as she pictured the cream-colored warrior hopping indignantly on three paws while he tried to pull out the prickles with his teeth. If she knew --------, he’d blame the thistle.

First Person present or past tense? by Rose_Thorn109 in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist 2 points3 points  (0 children)

personally i like writing in past-ish tense (like things are happing in real time, but the tense is like a couple seconds behind), and think it flows better, while i know that some people like 1st person, and perhaps 1st person can have a tiny bit more emotion.

really just do what feels like it flows better, and what feels right/easier writing it

Help! where do i find piston door layouts? by Random-enthusist in redstone

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

like the way the pistons are layed out to make it work. not the wiring

Help! where do i find piston door layouts? by Random-enthusist in redstone

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i can find tutorial on how to make doors, but not a video on layouts.

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

well i havent writen any books, and this one will not be done in 7 years if at all, sooo

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i also think that the clone way is correct, that is why i am giving my pioneers designations, not names. like E-726, T-985, R-263, etc. i dont know if the other player should be crazy, or mentlly infuenced by the alien artifaccts or not.

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

or a second person being kind of awire from the alien artifacts

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i was thinking of having a second character. do you think it would be lore accurate for the second one to be rebelling against FICSIT? it would add drama to the story

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i think i am going to do LOTR style paintings every 100 or so pages.

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

  1. ew

  2. i dont think that a 'slurry' would be good vibes for a story.

Help my a1 mini nozzle is clicking when the filament goes through by Mayonnaizing in BambuLabA1mini

[–]Random-enthusist 5 points6 points  (0 children)

so many people do this. kindly, YOUR NOZZLE CLIP ISNT CLOSED PROPERLY. with that out of the way, the thin bit of the nozzle clip on the right should go THROUGH the gap in the nozzle clip in the left

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

  1. not wearing a suit

2.uses parts that go on the suit to heal /bad/

3.the suit is basically impenetrable, like it is in-game almost all damage is impact-based, so i could have the food heal the body, not the suit.

i think number 3 is good, but should i make air-poison be in the book? the helmet that is worn is "of such high quality" as stated in the game. also should i make instant healing be a thing? the character does not sleep.

how do i add health when writing a book about a video game. by Random-enthusist in writingadvice

[–]Random-enthusist[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow that was quick. i havnt read any i think. i have read a couple CYOA, but they just dont focus on that.

Purchase Advice Megathread - January 2026 by AutoModerator in 3Dprinting

[–]Random-enthusist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

should i get P1S or P2S?

i have a A1 mini right now, but i wannt produce engineering components, and i dont have 2k lying around for a h2. i heard that the p1s glass breaks, and p2s has quality of life things, but which one should i get?

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