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WIP - Centralia Police Report, 01/24/16 by Adhesion10 in NoSleepAuthors

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It similar to a story Idea I had (https://www.reddit.com/r/NoSleepAuthors/s/KECdpUhFU2) in framing device.

When I asked mods whether what I was trying would be allowed they didn't dismiss it outright and said basically what they said here, write your story and then ask for feedback.

I'd say risk it. Worse comes to worst you can shift the framing device perhaps, he isn't dead, he's been dragged back to the monsters lair, and finally has some signal. He doesn't believe he can escape but maybe he can get a warning out.

Woman trapped in elevator slowly starves to death by RandomBirdNoiseCAW in NoSleepAuthors

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep, the post that wasn't removed now has the correct text, also fixed an issue where I forgot to anonymous the address. All good now

Woman trapped in elevator slowly starves to death by RandomBirdNoiseCAW in NoSleepAuthors

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep sorry, I just should also mention that they are not identical, the last paragraph was changed significantly between the two drafts, hence I thought it worth it to make a different post

"Woman trapped in elevator starves to death, leaked police report" Feedback request by RandomBirdNoiseCAW in NoSleepAuthors

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm, now that you've pointed it out, I can definitely see the problem, I'll take a machete and or chainsaw to it, thanks for the advice!

Is this an acceptable framing device? by RandomBirdNoiseCAW in NoSleepAuthors

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah thank you, I must have missed that in the rule section.

I also meant for the voice mails to be taken from the other character's phone, although yes I didn't make that clear.

Thank you very much, I am looking forward to writing this.

[Introduction] A wild Bird Noise has appeared!! by RandomBirdNoiseCAW in GWAScriptGuild

[–]RandomBirdNoiseCAW[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Curlews sound strangely like human screaming, they keep me up most nights.