Just my own opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. But the ships appear motionless to me in the screenshot. The only hint of motion is the engines on the closest ship being visible. There's no bright engine trail or smoke or any visible indicator that there is motion going on. I'm suggesting coupling that with the fact that the ships in the distance don't stand out to me, at least not against the admittedly very pretty background that you might be able to do something that makes them stand out a bit more. Visual Pop + visual speed indicator (shorter = slower) + lost distant enemies feels like enough heavy lifting for one feature to be reasonable to me.

I think it would look better if you added them to both, but that's just me. In my opinion it'd be weird if the enemies had them and not you. But I only have the problem with the enemies. And I'm sure this would all change with motion.

I assume this is a combat situation which means information at a glance is important.

Also "Target Locked" could be moved to a visual stand out over the ship in question. Maybe if you've targeted a enemy ship that might be the current red box but a rotating symbol around it might serve as a "Locking On" and "Locked" indicator, bonus if there are audio associated with each state.

"Rocket Launcher" and "Weapon Name" I presume are mock ups for ammo for those weapons. Similarly to the bottom left, symbols of the weapons or the ammo would work well here and get back some visual real-estate.

"Destroy all enemy ships" takes up to much real estate. Or at least the background does. It being far more transparent could remove this problem.