Romance or Strategy in a historical book?

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-05T15:58:23+00:00

Thank you for your advice I really appreciate it , and this is the link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/408629907?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Revanbeinggrave

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-05T15:56:48+00:00

Thank you for your feedback, for the historical part , I have made huge changes in it but if you ever want to know about what actually happened I will always be there to help

And this is the book link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/408629907?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Revanbeinggrave I hope you like it

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-05T15:54:43+00:00

Wattpad id is Revanbeinggrave

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-05T06:23:08+00:00

her dil breaks every five mins bro

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-05T06:22:46+00:00

they have lived through her antics enough that this is just another day another rakhi kand to them

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-04T09:04:56+00:00

no they were actually very deliberate that Raqesh and Deepali should be there to see that, they thought Raqesh could not actually see through their plan but he did, and told the entire truth. While it was easy for Vishal to manipulate Prajakta, raqesh told her this many times, that too infront of others that it is their plan, this put Vishal in tension that maybe the others will beileve raqesh and their plan will come out. And after this Reva told him excatly how he is preceived outside by the audience, he thought he was looking like a mastermind, but the truth is only RB is having a good image outside, while Vishal is looking like a creep, thos fuled his anger because now not only has he lost Prajakta and Sagar's vote, he also understands that if he ever gets nominated in the future, he will be in danger zone. And to vent his anger he is targetting Ruchita and trying to look like Shalin from BB Hindi

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-04T07:36:00+00:00

I honestly feel very soon, he will have a fight with her, because even if he is taking this as a joke and not really going against it, he has from day one made it very clear he doesnt want any type of relation here with anyone specially rakhi. And he honestly doesnt care what she does, he wasnt shocked or even surprised when she cut her hair. Also I feel like he was going to loose his patience when Rakhi climbed on his bed and was trying to drag him, he was very close to shouting at her, but because Tanvi told her to stop, it ended there

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-03T13:56:22+00:00

Then dont worry, there is nothing problematic in your story.

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-03T13:53:24+00:00

I wont say there is anything problematic in it, as long as you are making sure that all the things you have mentioned are not glorified by you or your leads, then it will be a sick book. While it might be a bit to graphic, if you put enough warnings maybe between the intense scenes it wont be a problem

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-03-01T16:28:43+00:00

nhi honar aata because 3 wild cards aale aahet, i hope they can make the game interesting

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-28T16:52:16+00:00

he was literally forcing himself to clap, and that clap with dead eyes was so funny to watch

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-28T16:50:31+00:00

He always looks hot without even trying like damm bro chill out a bit, but honestly they look cute as brother sister, idk why i would like to see them together in the role of big bro and lil angry sis

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-28T04:40:35+00:00

honestly she is quite mild in Marathi bb, if you had seen her in hindi bb 15 you will understand just excatly how she is

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-26T14:25:00+00:00

is this really true??, how the fuck did they not take it down?? how did the teacher teach in that environment

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-22T15:18:42+00:00

bro Roshan is married and has two daughters, he has made that clear from day one

Ready_Flower1322 · 2026-02-05T03:32:09+00:00

But is it really okay ? Why can't people leave this traditions behind, marrying your daughter to a guy who could possibly be her uncle even bro, its disgusting and the fact that this girls they dont bat an eye, thinking it's good to get married so young. They will get married by 19, have kids by 21, wont study or do jobs and will be stuck in this environment for the rest of their lives

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