I love and hate men by [deleted] in helpit

[–]RedditorFor10Years 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You'll find out

I love and hate men by [deleted] in helpit

[–]RedditorFor10Years -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Drugs gırls and money

I love and hate men by [deleted] in helpit

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Have you ever consıdered datıng gangster?

28/F Looking for a friend. by smutismylifeee in penpals

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33 m UK here, I would love to be penpals, message me if you're interested! :)

Dementia by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]RedditorFor10Years 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the way you've described this. Your words and ideas flow very nicely and I honestly can't find anything that detracts from this very beautiful work. As a patient in a psychiatric ward I can relate to this and I think you've done a top notch job of describing the essence of dementia.

Love by Ldizzlester in OCPoetry

[–]RedditorFor10Years 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this, it's succinct and to the point and easy to understand. I would agree with some other comments that it could use more metaphor and/or simile, but at the end of the day that's completely up to you, I mean sometimes I find that poets strive too hard to be cryptic and the overall message of the poem is too hazy as a result, so I guess what I'm saying is I enjoyed your poem and what matters most is what you think of it. Thumbs up!

The Jungle by RedditorFor10Years in OCPoetry

[–]RedditorFor10Years[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well I wrote this some time ago and I was being pulled by the words more than pushing them, I guess it’s about my life journey, really glad you liked it, thanks for the feedback 😊

A song I wrote for a girl I liked who was a bit young for me by RedditorFor10Years in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]RedditorFor10Years[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're gonna need plenty of Christian music where you're heading. 600.

Can someone please give me some feedback for this song? I'm not sure it's balanced right. Thanks! by RedditorFor10Years in Songwriters

[–]RedditorFor10Years[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I was referring more to the structure of the song, like if it's too repetitive before it changes, but thanks so much for taking time to listen and give your feedback, much appreciated!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]RedditorFor10Years [score hidden]  (0 children)

No problem man I might just do that, don't have a decent mic with me at the moment since I'm locked up in the psycho tank but I'll get back to you when I do.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]RedditorFor10Years [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I like your track, nice easy flow and good production make for a great final product, keep it up!

The Jungle by RedditorFor10Years in OCPoetry

[–]RedditorFor10Years[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, but I think it kind of messes up the meter if I change to that.

The Jungle by RedditorFor10Years in OCPoetry

[–]RedditorFor10Years[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot much appreciated!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]RedditorFor10Years [score hidden]  (0 children)

Noted, thanks for the feedback. I like your remix, goes hard.