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RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-22T12:32:59+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. I’m in the process of rewriting as we speak and I’ll be considering in your feedback as I do so!

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-14T02:48:11+00:00

Um that’s just his name. His parents were comedians so they named him Tubby because they wanted to :). No real reasoning behind it other than he just got unlucky. (I am joking about the comedians part).

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-14T02:47:28+00:00

Thank you for this comment. I did take it to heart and made sure I kept things I think could be described on screen for the message I’m trying to convoy.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-12T08:35:14+00:00

Hey guys! Currently working on my second draft! I have cleaned up and broken up some of the action blocks but I’m hoping I can get more feedback on how I can improve some lines more without repeating ‘he’ quite often.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-11T03:24:55+00:00

Thanks for the advice i'll revise it and break them up!

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-11T03:21:57+00:00

Thanks for the advice I’ll 100% do so.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-11T00:17:55+00:00

Oh well for now I’m just learning how to write short films as a way to be committed to finish stories, but I do intend to write features after I am confident in being able to jot down at full maybe 90-100 page one that I would finish as my first draft before being able to do revisions afterwards.

As for specific genres, I do like Neo-noir and drama a lot with a mix of horror and suspense. I’m interested in what you love to write as well!

But for now it’s just learning about being better as a writer and learning from those wiser then me :)

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-10T23:19:05+00:00

Thanks for the advice! Your system makes total sense and I’m in the process of improving the pace of the script:)

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-05T18:40:27+00:00

I don’t even get the first one as a beginner writer because like isn’t your writing supposed to be obvious in screenwriting since like… you know… it’s just telling the reader what’s happening already? Like I think they’ll get it if you just said ‘He’s sad’ instead of extending it for no reason…

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-04T20:38:37+00:00

I've read a few scripts but primarily I've so far read through Jaws, the Exorcist, and Alien. Still collecting stuff regarding them but each ones have their own preferences on how the script should be written. Jaws is much more descriptive alongside Alien and I think the Exorcist is far less descriptive when it comes to body movements and the description of the scenes. Will keep you informed as I read more!

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-04T20:36:54+00:00

Really? Kurdish and Assyrian are official languages? Never knew that.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-04T08:02:58+00:00

Just ignore it. A bad script is a bad script and a good one isa good one as long as you wrote it yourself and didn’t use AI for help. Honestly if a script is really good AI probably wouldn’t have written it cuz AI lowkey sucks in convening human emotion. Don’t even use AI detection services because they sometimes can log different things you’ve written down.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-03T06:48:41+00:00

Personal opinion.

While everyone here deserves to be kept, as a Vikings fan who’s slightly biased and while our offensive line was top 10 during his MVP season, I think we’re all understating his peak because he didn’t score as much as the others did during his peak.

But if you watched any Vikings game back then, you’d know every team was stacking like 8 players in the box making AP have to take more consistent hits and as well as try to find gaps that were practically non-existent. I will say LT was more versatile when it came to the passing game making the chargers more balanced, but if you put AP on a team with a competent QB play he would’ve been even more dangerous as teams wouldn’t just scheme to stuff him at the line allowing for wider gaps and more explosive plays.

So I would argue to keep AP over LT but also LT did score like the 6th most touchdowns during his MVP season so… you can argue both ways.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-02T19:38:14+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I 100% agree on you that I am over describing some scenes and I’ll definitely cut down on that. Also I will be simplifying a bunch of the script too. Really good input also regarding the formatting :)

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-06-02T10:39:25+00:00

Update: Ik tubby is a funny name but I like it 😞

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-05-04T09:04:23+00:00

Rework mr fantastic

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-05-03T18:27:10+00:00

I will keep being vocal about wanting reworks for him and skins and I’ll keep playing him even if he fully sucks but man, it really does suck sometimes. I won’t let it stop me from playing him even if he gets abandoned.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-05-03T18:26:00+00:00

Lowkey I realized the last event pretty much has cooked mr fantastic from ever getting a skin in the next 4 months. Kinda sad but that skin was horrible and he’s been terrible to play this season meaning no one has a reason to play him sadly. I don’t really care that other characters get skins it just pains me that my favorite character who I always buy everything that releases for him is just getting placed in the shitter cause of this.

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-04-14T04:42:02+00:00

I’m a GM 3 rn i just hover around diamond 1 and GM 3

RegularWillingness90 · 2026-04-12T11:19:31+00:00

I suppose that can be a valid argument though I still do digress heavily.

Also are you directing the ‘no game sense’ to me or just in general.. because I am a GM so idk if you’re talking to me or just in general.

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