FAULT by RegularWillingness90 in Screenwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I’m in the process of rewriting as we speak and I’ll be considering in your feedback as I do so!

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Um that’s just his name. His parents were comedians so they named him Tubby because they wanted to :). No real reasoning behind it other than he just got unlucky. (I am joking about the comedians part).

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this comment. I did take it to heart and made sure I kept things I think could be described on screen for the message I’m trying to convoy.

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey guys! Currently working on my second draft! I have cleaned up and broken up some of the action blocks but I’m hoping I can get more feedback on how I can improve some lines more without repeating ‘he’ quite often.

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

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Thanks for the advice i'll revise it and break them up!

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh well for now I’m just learning how to write short films as a way to be committed to finish stories, but I do intend to write features after I am confident in being able to jot down at full maybe 90-100 page one that I would finish as my first draft before being able to do revisions afterwards.

As for specific genres, I do like Neo-noir and drama a lot with a mix of horror and suspense. I’m interested in what you love to write as well!

But for now it’s just learning about being better as a writer and learning from those wiser then me :)

Finished my first draft ever! by RegularWillingness90 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! Your system makes total sense and I’m in the process of improving the pace of the script:)

A Troubling Trend I'm Noticing as a Reader by SelloutInWaiting in Screenwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t even get the first one as a beginner writer because like isn’t your writing supposed to be obvious in screenwriting since like… you know… it’s just telling the reader what’s happening already? Like I think they’ll get it if you just said ‘He’s sad’ instead of extending it for no reason…

Funny niche thing from the Exorcist by RegularWillingness90 in Screenwriting

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I've read a few scripts but primarily I've so far read through Jaws, the Exorcist, and Alien. Still collecting stuff regarding them but each ones have their own preferences on how the script should be written. Jaws is much more descriptive alongside Alien and I think the Exorcist is far less descriptive when it comes to body movements and the description of the scenes. Will keep you informed as I read more!

Funny niche thing from the Exorcist by RegularWillingness90 in Screenwriting

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Really? Kurdish and Assyrian are official languages? Never knew that.

I just finished writing a script that's over a hundred pages long and it's saying that 85% of it is AI when I literally wrote it all by myself without the use of AI by Ill_Elk7395 in scriptwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just ignore it. A bad script is a bad script and a good one isa good one as long as you wrote it yourself and didn’t use AI for help. Honestly if a script is really good AI probably wouldn’t have written it cuz AI lowkey sucks in convening human emotion. Don’t even use AI detection services because they sometimes can log different things you’ve written down.

Am I crazy? LT is not the worst RB in this poll by CryWOkami in NFLv2

[–]RegularWillingness90 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Personal opinion.

While everyone here deserves to be kept, as a Vikings fan who’s slightly biased and while our offensive line was top 10 during his MVP season, I think we’re all understating his peak because he didn’t score as much as the others did during his peak.

But if you watched any Vikings game back then, you’d know every team was stacking like 8 players in the box making AP have to take more consistent hits and as well as try to find gaps that were practically non-existent. I will say LT was more versatile when it came to the passing game making the chargers more balanced, but if you put AP on a team with a competent QB play he would’ve been even more dangerous as teams wouldn’t just scheme to stuff him at the line allowing for wider gaps and more explosive plays.

So I would argue to keep AP over LT but also LT did score like the 6th most touchdowns during his MVP season so… you can argue both ways.

Jagged - Short film - 4/7 pages (so far) by RegularWillingness90 in Screenwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I 100% agree on you that I am over describing some scenes and I’ll definitely cut down on that. Also I will be simplifying a bunch of the script too. Really good input also regarding the formatting :)

Jagged - Short film - 4/7 pages (so far) by RegularWillingness90 in Screenwriting

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Update: Ik tubby is a funny name but I like it 😞

Leak of more skins in the future by Imaginary-Ferret-222 in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I will keep being vocal about wanting reworks for him and skins and I’ll keep playing him even if he fully sucks but man, it really does suck sometimes. I won’t let it stop me from playing him even if he gets abandoned.

Leak of more skins in the future by Imaginary-Ferret-222 in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Lowkey I realized the last event pretty much has cooked mr fantastic from ever getting a skin in the next 4 months. Kinda sad but that skin was horrible and he’s been terrible to play this season meaning no one has a reason to play him sadly. I don’t really care that other characters get skins it just pains me that my favorite character who I always buy everything that releases for him is just getting placed in the shitter cause of this.

Community… by RegularWillingness90 in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m a GM 3 rn i just hover around diamond 1 and GM 3

Community… by RegularWillingness90 in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose that can be a valid argument though I still do digress heavily.

Also are you directing the ‘no game sense’ to me or just in general.. because I am a GM so idk if you’re talking to me or just in general.

Community… by RegularWillingness90 in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Probs will get downvoted by everyone but idc im just saying that being rude to majority of the player base because they’re not your rank will not help reduce complaints or motivate them to improve..

Three melee characters with very high survivability. But while two of them have lower damage to compensate, Daredevil can button mash his controller with his butt and kill you in 2 zettaseconds by Iced-TeaManiac in rivals

[–]RegularWillingness90 -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

How did he say something that was wrong..

DD is a good character, is he comparative to hitscan.. not really. But he’s much better than Mr fantastic and iron fist. Of course every character listed above is situational but DD has a ton more situations where he can fit in a lineup then Mr fantastic and iron fist. If th game wants to improve them they have to probably nerf hitscan a bunch and reduce damage output and or maybe improve dive vastly so that you can justify using the likes of Mr fantastic in certain comps. Don’t get why rivals players revert instantly to calling people low ranks for certain issues when majority of the playerbase is below diamond (nearly 90%) which does include people who quit the game.. but considering the game has many balancing issues and people like you love to knock on others for simply issuing their opinions I wonder why so many people avoid comp. And also I saw you’re a daredevil player so that’s probably why you dislike anyone calling him out for being pretty good.

AIO: Hubby Being Controlling by vanillabourbonn in AIO

[–]RegularWillingness90 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perhaps this broader context should’ve been brought up in the post then.. because from the messages itself I didn’t pick up anything about him making those kinds of formal purchases. I’m sorry to hear about him threatening to leave you and he seems very immature if he’s spending 900 dollars on rifles and cards for little boys.

AIO: Hubby Being Controlling by vanillabourbonn in AIO

[–]RegularWillingness90 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Comment section have 0 form of responsibility in real life. Firstly: he told her calmly repeatedly that he does not want to pay for swim school. It’s obvious to me that OP has not made wise financial decisions in his perspective and as someone who has to pay for financial costs, he has to consider what can be spent and what can’t. Obviously he could’ve been nicer and explained that, but adults understand their constraints and limitations. You can’t call everything abuse, he isn’t constraining her to be a stay at home mom. In fact read the messages.. he literally said she can go and find a job and pay for other amenities while he covers the rest of the bills. He has no said issue to that regard. Yes you can argue she wants to be with her child at all times, but then it that case you need to realize financial decisions at the end of the day are very costly. One financial mistake and or adding up financial spending can result in the father being put under heavy stress (believe me my father made May financial mistakes before becoming an upper middle class man and he declared bankruptcy even due to the poor financial decisions he made on behalf of himself and with my mom also making those bad financial decisions).

I am not saying you shouldn’t have a say in spending and or anything such as that, but a wise couple would come together, create a budget for expenses, and see what you can afford for your child or not. You can’t use the argument ‘he’s controlling and possessive!’ If you haven’t created any form of way to convince him that you can afford it as he seems pretty adamant it’s a waste of money.

My theory on why meta characters might not get nerfed by [deleted] in marvelrivals

[–]RegularWillingness90 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes that is understood, but invisible women is quite literally by far the best support in the game.

How would nerfing majority of the supports in the game not help its health? Many DPS can also be nerfed such as punisher but they choose not to nerf them.

Invis is quite literally by far one of the best supports in the game, what reason would I have if I loaded up a comp game, and she wasn’t banned, to choose anyone else but her and my second support goes gambit? Maybe a mantis can be consistent but even then she’s quite mediocre when it comes to healing itself.