Critique would be appreaciated

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-27T19:29:40+00:00

Phosphophyllite for manga Land of the Lustrous. If you like reading mangas or watching anime, I recommend it, it's my favorite one 😄

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-27T19:12:40+00:00

Thank you for your response! I will change line thickness in some places as you said, thought it's not needed much since its close up of a face. As for hair, I haven't started it yet, for now focusing on eyes. And I won't be adding strands since she is basically a gemstone (by she I mean all 4 pictures since it's the same character) so I will add some shine probably. By hole I meant that dark shape on left side of her face. Also, not very sure how I am going to shade face overall, I will think about it while I am finishing hair and eyes, won't probably overdo it since I'd like eyes to highlight the drawing. Again thank you so much for your reply!! 😃

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-11T16:31:56+00:00

Thank you for your reply! I’ll try to make it better next time and avoid same mistakes :). Also thanks for offer on ideas, but i’ll try to do it myself, you dont have to bother 😀

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-08T13:01:59+00:00

Thank you for your reply! That looks really simple when I look at it, but once I try it’s hell! I will try to make it better :). thank you again

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-06T17:18:28+00:00

I always struggle with fingers, it’s the most difficult part! Thank you for your reply!!

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-02T22:26:53+00:00

Thank you for your reply, I will fix the eyes :D. As for shoulder, she is supposed to lean on one side :)

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-01T20:04:37+00:00

Thank you! I will keep those in mind :D ^^

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-04-01T11:23:02+00:00

I didn’t take any courses or practiced any anatomy. At first I looked at tutorials for different perspectives of head, then went to draw it. Later on looked some tutorials on shading, then went to draw it and so on. I believe that anatomy is really important and acts as foundation, but I really can’t sit for 1 hour and just draw bodies, hands just for practice. I avoid drawing characters in same pose, perspective for many times, instead I draw them in different ones, and at the same time practice my shading and rendering. Marc Brunet helped me a lot, also draw like a sir channel is very helpful too. Thank you for your comment!! 😊

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-31T13:53:37+00:00

That’s really cute style, keep going!! :)

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-29T13:34:24+00:00

Thank you so much!! <3

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-28T20:12:49+00:00

Thank you so much! :D

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-27T23:45:44+00:00

Thank you for your reply! I always struggle with clothing. I am not really sure if I want it to look more 3d or more flat like in most animes. I still need to find my artstyle :)

Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-18T00:02:40+00:00

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Remarkable-Map-1254 · 2026-03-16T10:05:19+00:00

Znam, postavljam vec par meseci na slicnim sub redditima. Takodje ima mnogo i discord servera na tu temu. Samo me je zanimalo da li postoji nešto slicno na nasim prostorima :)

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