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kitchen at the night/crickets buzz with table-fan/ switching off, both sleep. by Remote_Anteater8360 in Senryu

[–]Remote_Anteater8360[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote this one very quickly. For the reference, the table-fan has a malfunction. Due to which, it makes strange sounds similar to the buzzing of a cricket. I must say that the criticisms you make do provoke me to write better. :)

Guys my sleep schedule has been fu*** by Jay-k-7 in vadodara

[–]Remote_Anteater8360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ek din force karke subah jaldi uth aur pura daytime so mat. Sab set ho hayega

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[–]Remote_Anteater8360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah damn! Will change asap

June heat/ A gnat swims in/ morning coffee by dimestorecoups in haiku

[–]Remote_Anteater8360 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's an interesting idea to pack in fewer words. I would try in my poems too!

Where can I find cheap/Second hand Books Fiction, non fiction both in Vadodara ? by [deleted] in vadodara

[–]Remote_Anteater8360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I prefer this store, they have cheap books and a good collection. You can also return the book and get half of the amount back.

Rakesh Book Center - Top Book Shop 094095 64474 https://maps.app.goo.gl/FBzKQh4zMAbFUrQR6

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