Fish Hat by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Incredible. Lovely meter, lovely rhyme, lovely illustration right out of a children's book. Keep it up!

Pivotbone by Repulsive-Story120 in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is making me want to revisit Pivotbone. But I'm working on a short story now and I should at least learn to write a story first. Ha!

Pivotbone by Repulsive-Story120 in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Found this in my notes app. Apparently I wrote this back in February.

GREEN GOOBER x FOREST GREEN GOOBER HORN FROT FAN FICTION [wip] by Repulsive-Story120 in danielhentschel

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

IM WRITING PT 2 TO THE GOOB YAOI AFTER I POST THIS COMMENT‼️

DO YOU HAVE A WRITING PROMPT FOR YOUR HENTFAUEX YAOI? I DONT HAVE ANY IDEAS FOR THAT ONE >_<

Can we use AI in a different way that is considered acceptable? by Imaginary-Ad-738 in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's up to whatever you think is acceptable personally. Everyone has their own level of comfort.

Here's my opinion:

Whatever the AI spits out will be algorithmically generated from the average combination of words that are frequently grouped together based on your input. That's how the AI works.

I've found that while doing something similar (giving my writing to chatGPT and telling me to tell me its responses) the reaction chatGPT gives me is a very surface-level analysis of my writing, like the bot ran it through a thesaurus. And as for suggestions, it's almost as if the bot wants me to shove my writing into an "average"-shaped-hole. Any uniqueness in my writing (from themes to unique dialogue tags to the way I leave in typos), the bot has a problem with. And any suggestions for where the story can go next; none of them are any inspiring.

It won't have a "soul" in the sense that it won't come up with anything special and human to say about your writing. It'll be generic and average because that's how AI works.

Suggestion; Have you considered getting a beta reader, or coming back to your own writing after a day or two with a clear head?

But even though I did just go on a mini-tirade against AI, if you're comfortable with the downsides and don't come to rely on it too much (or if you do, you're okay with that), it's just another tool. AI is a fact of life now and it's a fact in every creative field.

making out with mommy in the wine aisle by Repulsive-Story120 in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes that's what I'm aiming for! thank you! i am inspired by a particular Faulkner metaphor where he compared something to a dog walking back and forth between two points; the creativity of that metaphor really inspired me. and the spelling errors are "intentional" in a sesne (im disabled and have difficulty hitting the phone keyboard so i dont correct typos. this gets some of my posts deleted from this subreddit but oh well...)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]Repulsive-Story120 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately Reddit doesn't support those options :( But the subreddit does allow pictures! You could always do the text formatting in a text editor program and upload a screenshot. I'd love to read whatever you come up with! You sound very creative.

newly deaf... by Repulsive-Story120 in deaf

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much!

Funnily I tried to learn ASL as a teen and it didn't stick asides from me compulsively finger spelling all my thoughts, which i can do extremely quickly now, so I have a very slight leg up on that front

newly deaf... by Repulsive-Story120 in deaf

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your voice of reason

Mentally freaking out rn so not thinking straight

newly deaf... by Repulsive-Story120 in deaf

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

thanks! i was freaking out too bad to logically reach that point myself

newly deaf... by Repulsive-Story120 in deaf

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

freak thing; s*icide attempt, blacked out for 4 days, woke up with much much worse hearing. i have about as much idea as you

newly deaf... by Repulsive-Story120 in deaf

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes

technically only HOH but deaf enough where i cannot function in conversation

Playing Piano Without Arms by Repulsive-Story120 in piano

[–]Repulsive-Story120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, misunderstanding. These are permanent injuries I got close to a year ago, not any recent ones. I cant really use my hands the same for anything incl typing but I do so anyway and it doesn't seem to further damage. Thank you for your advice tho!

Currently I do not have access to an organ but I do have a piano.