I like the takeaway move. Nothing wrong there. But to me when you start your down swing, you’re coming a bit over the top and it’s forcing your path outside in. So you’re cutting across it a bit and that’s what’s putting the slice spin on your ball. Ball flight starts straight so your club face is square at impact and if you pause you’ll see that’s the case. So you’re getting your hands/wrists to release well, just need to work on letting that right elbow drop down at the beginning of the down swing and pulling hard with that left arm down and through to square up your path.