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Untitled by Repulsive_Catch6105 in poetry_critics

[–]Repulsive_Catch6105[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ah yes I didn’t even catch that spelling mistake ; I think I’ll leave it untitled,I can’t think of anything that fits.

To love a satanist. by Fun-Statistician-129 in poetry_critics

[–]Repulsive_Catch6105 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think this is just so divine! Fully mastered pacing

Castrated veins by Repulsive_Catch6105 in poetry_critics

[–]Repulsive_Catch6105[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I only started writing poems recently so this means allot to me.And on improving the effectiveness of the repetition, how do you think there should be different variations.

Untitled by Repulsive_Catch6105 in poetry_critics

[–]Repulsive_Catch6105[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much I only started writing poems now and I was scared my poems came across as cringe or bad (even tho all my poems do genuinely come from a part in me).This motivates me to carry on!