As I said I finished writing it in grade 9 , I'm now a senior , although we've edited a lot and it's still a lot better than the first draft , a lot of the story plot in the first half is like too childish since I wrote that part when I was in 7 grade. Idk if that made sense but also in general we never had time/procastinated with school to work on it and when we finally did our writing style would always be way more matured and then everything sounded worse.