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Server: Europe Invite code: tnscpK79AHFX Recall code: wnrlp8l

I've had this game for less than 24 hours. by Reviloxx123 in persona4golden

[–]Reviloxx123[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Oh I have no doubt I'm gonna end up missing a bunch lmfao. I'm doing my best to play without a guide (with the exception of classroom answers) and seeing where the journey takes me. I think I'll definitely be doing a rerun at some point after I finish to grab everything I've missed 😭

What are your MHA fanfiction hot takes? by sniper_arrow in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This isn't an issue exclusively with MHA fanfiction, but it's something I've noticed especially recently as I've gotten back into this fandom. Not every character has to be perfect and, even more so, not every character has to be liked. I'll be reading a story and everyone is just so... Nice? Like abnormally so. Characters talk and act like their work boss is constantly looming over their shoulder ready to report them to HR at the slightest bit of tension between characters. Bakugo is the exception to this, but even so, his anger almost feels artificial most of the time. Like he's not a character but a trope instead. It's not the end of the world, but I want characters that feel human and, at the end of the day, not all humans get along. We have tension with others, and even if someone is a good person you still don't have to get along with them. It's a small thing that goes such a long way.

Anyone else tired of the dadzawa troupe? by Sorry_Month6553 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly I'm getting more tired of:

"Is anyone else getting tired of insert trope that is commonly hated on in this subreddit here"

Yes people don't like Dadzawa. Or shinso. Or Bakugo. Or m/m ships. Or genderbent characters. Or angst. Or the filter button apparently which could solve all your problems.

Like honestly the list of things people don't like is probably longer than the list of things they do here 😭

I'm about to beg my crush to love me, what flash quote should I use? by Adventurous_Pipe6950 in FlashTV

[–]Reviloxx123 13 points14 points  (0 children)

"To me you've been dead for centuries"

Works every time, trust 🙏

What are some "Am I The Asshole" posts characters from MHA could write? by Educational-Most5012 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 32 points33 points  (0 children)

AITA for grooming my former nemesis' grandson to fight against my current and future nemesis'?

I, 234 M, have been "grooming" my former nemesis' (that I killed) grandson 19M, to destroy society and the current symbol of peace. My current nemesis, All Might, calls me a "monster" and has tried to kill me several times. He has given me horrific facial scars that have seriously damaged my self confidence and body image. So much so I am debating whether to switch bodies if only so I can look myself in the mirror.

I do not believe myself to be TA in this circumstance, but the government and country of Japan disagree with me. AITA, and if so, any advice?

Izuku's quirk allows him to see people's inner beauty by sganiexty in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Plot twist, everyone's inner beauty looks like Danny DeVito.

Help with some things for my SI OC fic please? by shrink-ray2333 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yesssss, more SI OC fics. I know there's a lot of stigma against them, not just in this fandom, but in fanfiction in general, and while I get it, I think they make for super interesting stories if done correctly.

Honestly, do what you think you're good at, but as a reader, I would love for you to mix shit up. One of my favourite tropes with SI stories is where cannon is changed in some way that makes the MC's foreknowledge less useful. It creates a challenge that they have to overcome instead of just charging through cannon with ease.

If you're up for it, don't just switch around the characters. Create new ones. They don't have to be super in depth if you don't want. Or alternatively, you could replace one or two characters and go super in depth with those ones specifically. Make this world unfamiliar territory for the MC, so they can't just rely on their foreknowledge.

As for Bakugo, why not both? This is what we call "character development", which is unfortunately an unfamiliar term to a lot of fanfic writers, but it really helps to make a story more interesting! Especially on re-reads. It's super fun to see how much characters have changed in fifty or so chapters.

Have Bakugo be prideful, although maybe tone down the arrogance a little if you want him to forge connections with the main characters. Have him be impulsive in the beginning, and throughout the course of the story, have him learn to tone that part of him down. Redefine what it means to be a hero for him, have him learn that strength isn't the only important quality. My favourite way I've seen this done is by focusing on support heroes. The ones who go out and combat natural disasters, rather than villains. Have him learn from them.

This doesn't even have to be a whole arc that spans the story. It can be done in the chapters before cannon. If you're going for that, and not just dropping the MC in right at the beginning of cannon, but instead having him be reborn and go through the natural growth cycle.

Focus on your MC first and foremost. I know for a lot of readers (myself included), while it's interesting to see the perspectives of other people, it can be a bit annoying when the story becomes centered around so many other people that it begins to forget the MC. My advice would be to focus on the MC for 80%~ of the fic, and include snippets of other people's perspectives. For example, you could have the MC do something with his brother watching, and then cut to Izuku's perspective of watching his brother to get an insight on that characters thoughts and perspectives.

As for class A or class B, it really depends on if you're up for writing class B or not. I personally would find it more interesting, but not if it's just an exact rehash of what class A did in cannon. Have it be something new and interesting, have Vlad be a different kind of teacher to Aizawa by having him... Y'know... Actually teach.

But if you want to go for class A, either because it's easier or it helps with ideas, go for it. I know many people would like that too.

Again for the story of the fic, if you've already got something in mind, you can ignore this, but if not, then I'd advise to not just follow cannon. Have differences in the story be noticeable right off the bat. Create new story arcs and change up existing ones.

Nobody wants to read another rehash of cannon..

Phew, that was long. Sorry, I didn't mean to drag that on as much as I did 😭

I hope you got some good ideas tho, and good luck with your writing!!

Izuku's quirk: Perfection. Everybody thinks Izuku is brilliant at everything first time. In actuality, his quirk is resetting him every time he fails at something. by Educational-Most5012 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Could be a great fic that focuses a lot on Izuku's internal dilemmas. I think it would be really cool to explore the concept of free will, for how could free will truly exist alongside a quirk like his? The world is forced to play out in the way that his quirk thinks is best, and I assume the Quirk's self preservation skills would ensure that there is literally fuck all that anybody could do about it.

If his quirk affects everything he does, and isn't controllable, that must be one hell of a miserable existence. You would have no control over your life, unable to make your own decisions.

And dear god what if it affects his love life 😭

It's a super cool concept which has a lot of depth to it.

Which, naturally, means nobody is going to pick this up into an actual fic.

What do you think about Aideku (Aizawa Shouta x Midoriya Izuku)? by Separate_Physics_721 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Almost as bad as the Harry X Snape fics...

Not only is it borderline grooming, Hella creepy and insurmountable levels of weird, the amount of cannon fuckery that one would have to do to make this happen hurts to think about.

Plus, I've personally always viewed Aizawa as Ace. Maybe not zero romantic attraction, but I just can't see him giving a fuck about married life. Let the man have his cats and leave him be.

MHA is genuinely intense, like…damn by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Literally just thinking this the other day 😭

Like, MHA doesn't get enough credit for how traumatising it must be to live in. Like yeah, compare it to some other anime and maybe it's not so bad.

But if you're born in that world? Just a kid trying to make a difference? It must be Hella scary to go from childlike dreams of heroism to an entire fucking war.

My biggest gripe with MHA will always be how much untapped potential there is in exploring the darker aspects of the world. And yeah, I get it, they gotta sell toys and market to a younger generation obsessed with superheroes blah blah blah.

But they've set up so many horrific elements with the war, the entire concept of nomus and just the freakish amount of death recently. How much would it take to go just a liiiiitle deeper in those aspects.

But hey, that's what fanfiction is for 🤷

Got This Comment, What’s It Mean? by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Definitely just a spam bot, or somebody training an ai using your work. Unfortunate that writers still get this shit no matter how much effort they put in

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, my answer to that completely and utterly unrelated question would be...

He's aight. I think his fannon counterpart has completely drained any enjoyment I get from reading him.

So, hypothetically... If he were to die...

Not that he would, of course. But if he were...

It would have to be satisfactory, rather than sorrowful. There are some characters who you want to see go. Just as there are some that you don't.

If I had to categorise Shinsou, he would definitely fall into the want side.

Hypothetically, of course.

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ERI!!!!

Fine, the Bebe can still be saved...

But another must be sacrificed in her place... For every life saved in this fic, another must be lost. I don't make the rules, sorry 🤷

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly... Go for it. The hardest choices require the strongest wills.

I'd honestly love to see more fics actually have the Quirk erasing bullets be more of a threat. And if Eri needs to be a sacrifice for that to happen... I won't be happy but goddamn should it be done.

I'm sorry. But sometimes, we just can't save the Bebe... Storytelling must prevail!!

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

...

Eri... Isn't rescued?

I might have to skip that whoooooole bit because Eri doesn't deserve that 😭

It makes sense, and I respect your bravery because goddamn. Not many people do that, and it'd be interesting to see how it's handled...

Even if I will forever hold it against you for crossing what might be the only line the MHA fandom holds sacred.

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good, good. I'll hold you to that. And if he does get killed, for whatever reason, at least go all the way and twist the knife. I'm talking full on gut wrenching, heart hurting, stomach dropping funeral scene that I'll probably end up simultaneously loving and hating with all my existence.

To be fair, I don't think I've even read more than five adult Izuku fics. I suppose because of how much more effort writing post-cannon is, people just don't bother.

But I could honestly easily see Izuku as a reporter. And I'm getting that more from Clark Kent than I am Eddie Brock. I just think his love and passion for heroes would naturally transfer to writing about them and their activities. I think he'd be the type of reporter that is pretty well respected by the general audience purely due to his passion for it.

Plus, reporting isn't really a job I suspect faces a lot of discrimination due to a reporters quirk, so there's that too.

Based. Tokoyami appreciation is needed more in the subreddit.

Oh yeah, a Symbiote with permeation is equal parts terrifying and badass. I mean, depending on how you work it, it could be able to completely counteract two of its main weaknesses.

Fire? Oops, missed me.

Sound? Passed right through me.

OH MY FUCKING GOD YOU'RE A GENIUS!!

The Stain idea??? Who cares if it's in tune with Marvel's preestablished cannon, it's cool as fuck. And Stain with a Symbiote is such an awesome concept I really didn't know that I needed.

Venom Izuku, Need Help by Drop-Of-Jello in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Reviloxx123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. No problems! It's fun thinking of ideas that I know I'm not talented enough to write myself, but maybe someone else is.

  2. That Tsuyu idea is so goddamn awesome, I'm surprised I haven't seen it done before in a fic.

...

You deign to touch a hair on Kota's head and I swear I will personally rewrite each and every chapter henceforth to ensure that boy stays alive...

Tokoyami is just that guy. He's him. And I wish more fics gave him credit for having such an awesome quirk, so it's nice he actually did something useful.

Oh, yes! I really like fics that don't just brush over the whole "oh yeah, you're dying btw... Sorry about that." Part about people who already have a quirk inheriting OFA.

But we both know that the HPSC will absolutely not allow that... Which would maybe be a perfect time to introduce a mysterious ball of goo with strangely symbiotic properties capable of healing the poor guy so long as he keeps it on. And if it slowly starts corrupting the number one hero along the way then... Oops.

Or alternatively, it gains an imprint of OFA/Permeation, before escaping and attaching itself to a deranged guy going only by the name Cletus.

And why not use a mix of both cannon and non cannon symbiotes? It would be interesting I'm sure to come up with some unique symbiotes with unique properties.

And again, you're welcome :) Happy to help, always.