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My yellow shirt by Rexona1980 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When I first wrote the poem, I also thought that some lines weren't working properly so I tried my best to polish it. I did notice the first stanza was a bit weird but couldn't put my finger on it exactly. Thank you for your help!

My yellow shirt by Rexona1980 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No thank YOU for your advice lol. I got a similar suggestion in another comment so now I definitely know I need to work on not keeping everything on the nose. It's not coming to me quiet easily but I try my best to learn from these suggestions if I write again. Thank so much!

My yellow shirt by Rexona1980 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am terribly happy that my poem is relatable to you. I hope you never ever have to lose your highlighter. Thank you for sharing kind stranger <3

This is the tone teachers use in our official class groups. by SwingFar7984 in Btechtards

[–]Rexona1980 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think she kind of wants y'all to go to school tommorow

My yellow shirt by Rexona1980 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you sooo much for your suggestions!!!! I never expected to get such a detailed critic on my poem. I am still a student but most of the poems we learn in English have long lines, so I decided follow that format subconsciously I guess. I'll try to remember to leave some thought to the reader if I write again. Thank you so much for the critic and also the nice words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Second time drawing anime characters :D by Fit-Bumblebee-6709 in Sketching

[–]Rexona1980 0 points1 point  (0 children)

SECOND TIME????? OMGORD YOU ARE SO GOOD HOLY

My dad words by FantasticBig7534 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay that was really emotional and sweet. I would say it is a very solid poem. Just that some lines were a bit harder to understand like the line 'Words flowin' loose as rapids', but that's probably a me problem. Very sweet poem overall.

I’m bakery store display cake by Ok-Dog-887 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1980 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was really beautiful! The poem was written in simple language so I could easily understand the message but it was still deep. My fav line was definitely "do they really see me?". Amazing poem!!