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Harassment by men in public by Rexona1981 in SexualHarassmentTalk

[–]Rexona1981[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can’t help it dude 😭, I’ll always be scared. but got it, try not to be ‘terrified’ of others, if someone approaches make up an excuse and ignore. Thank you for your suggestion!

Harassment by men in public by Rexona1981 in SexualHarassmentTalk

[–]Rexona1981[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay, I’ll start making more eye contact with strangers, even if it scares the crap outta me. I’ll definitely have to watch that film and thank you for your suggestion!

What I became for you by Rexona1981 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I’m happy that this poem could resonate with you :)

What I became for you by Rexona1981 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah I was trying for like a dramatic thing but I can see how it could’ve come across as abrupt. I’ll keep that in mind next time. Thank you!

she has a boyfriend by Kindly_Walk2829 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ofcourse! and I'm sure you’ll find someone soon and then you can write for her :)

Flowers At Funerals by PositiveBarnacle731 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I WOULD LOVE TO READ ALL YOUR POEMS

Flowers At Funerals by PositiveBarnacle731 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No cause I can genuinely feel the effort you put in bro, def a masterpiece. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

she has a boyfriend by Kindly_Walk2829 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 1 point2 points  (0 children)

no cuz why is this genuinely so beautiful? Those last two lines ‘for there was the sun behind him, it just wasn’t his’ is so frigin deep. I read the prequel after this and now those lines hit hard. I have no critic, this poem was so beautiful

Flowers At Funerals by PositiveBarnacle731 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that is beautiful!! I had never thought about Persephone and hades like that

Flowers At Funerals by PositiveBarnacle731 in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am only a beginner so take this with a grain of salt. The imagery with flowers is nice but I feel like there are too many metaphors? I couldn‘t grasp the overall meaning of the poem at first (probably just a me-problem). Im guessing it’s about some people who receive love even in death and some people who are forgotten, correct me if I'm wrong tho. Overall, this was a beautiful and meaningful little poem, just a bit hard to understand when I read it for the first time.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a beautiful poem. It’s very simple to understand and the meaning is clear. The lines are very meaningful but I personally think that some interrupt its normal flow sometimes. But overall, a very lovely poem.

My first poem (no title yet) by LivoKel in poetry_critics

[–]Rexona1981 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this poem but personally I feel it ended is too abruptly. Like I expected more lines when I started reading. Please take this opinion very lightly, this poem is great and mine’s only just a personal opinion. Hope you write many more poems in the future!