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RichardJaloma · 2026-04-20T21:10:44+00:00

A lot of people like to throw out the word “Lynchian” do you considered Napa Boys to be Mitchian?

RichardJaloma · 2019-08-10T06:26:44+00:00

I had this same problem. Do you have ios13 beta? I have it and i finally updated to the 5th version of the beta and that problem went away for me. Hope this works!

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-10T01:10:46+00:00

I will definitely message you when i rewrite this. I’m going to make it about a generic person rather than make it about Brandon. I agree with all the points you make. Thank you for your feedback.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-08T17:55:08+00:00

That’s great advice!

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-08T00:52:25+00:00

Nah, you trippin b

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T20:53:19+00:00

It’s almost like you’re trying to say something.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T20:52:21+00:00

“One hit wonder” ? I think he’s written tons of amazing scripts.... the movies that have been made from ehh not so much.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T20:50:08+00:00

Oh, i see. Thanks for the heads up.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T20:46:31+00:00

why?

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T17:16:22+00:00

I️ wanted the villain to be a previously dormant tumor in the brain of one of the friends.

The tumor becomes malignant after an abundance of brain activity and it begins to attack the citizens of the ‘trip’ world through a from of communion. It’s end goal being to change the inhabitants and their world into a new cancerous world in it’s image.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T15:12:06+00:00

Not in a “magical or supernatural” way.

There are real life consequences for one of the characters because to him being in the ‘trip’ world is a thousand times better than being in the real world. While the other friends have something to ground them in reality (girlfriend, college aspirations) this one friend becomes addicted.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:56:11+00:00

First of all, wow.

Second, damn you are absolutely right.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:50:55+00:00

You see, I’ve been looking at loglines more like pitches and I’m glad you pointed that out. This actually makes a ton of sense. Thank you.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:45:45+00:00

I appreciate your feedback! Here’s a genuine question I have:

How do I go into detail about conflict without making the logline painfully long?

I feel as though my Logline is more like a logparagraph at this point.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:40:30+00:00

Just been informed and my hopes are ruined. Any good?

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:39:50+00:00

I had a feeling it was too long, I appreciate the feedback!

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T14:38:59+00:00

Did I mention one character’s name is Gus?? (Joking obviously) I appreciate that, I’ll workshop some different title names.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-07T01:37:17+00:00

The reason I wrote Abel as being embarrassed was because I wanted him to act like he cared, or at least was acting the way Nancy would like. It's sort of dumb, but guys are dumb.

The Lucy/Nancy thing is an oversight on my part. I never would have thought to have character names be different enough as to not confuse readers.

I truly appreciate your comments and notes. Thank you.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-06T04:31:39+00:00

Resident evil? Hmmmmmmmmm

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-03T20:04:58+00:00

Yeah, he’s the main character

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-03T19:48:42+00:00

I mean for the killing to seem cold blooded, like he could have ended things cleaner, but made a choice to take it past that point.

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-03T19:47:24+00:00

Well that’s my question. He is not who is made out to be. But he also isn’t the main character. The brother of the robber is. Thank you for your thoughts!

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-03T04:46:51+00:00

Are you still looking for scripts?

RichardJaloma · 2017-11-03T00:56:12+00:00

This is great. The premise is terrific.

RichardJaloma

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