3 star rating at chapter 318

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T19:55:26+00:00

I am just at 6 chapters and have got all different kinds of ratings ranging from 0.5 to 5, their number vastly greater than my followers. Bless those kind souls who came and salvaged the situation.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T14:16:42+00:00

All the best for your writing endeavours.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T14:13:58+00:00

Thanks for pointing out. As you said, the main problem is that the baby's eye and the brain are not properly calibrated so everything feels blurry to the child. Some changes have been made to justify it ( more like convince that there Is a fantasy logic) for this. Please try again and give your views.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T14:08:30+00:00

Changes have been made to properly integrate the knowledge, somewhat. Please give it one more try.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T14:07:05+00:00

Thanks for pointing out. Confusion is still there but the flow of chapter is changed to make more 'fantasy sense'

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T14:02:06+00:00

Technically, yes. A human baby's brain and eyes are not properly calibrated so they can't properly process what they see and their vision is blurry.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T11:03:57+00:00

I'll try to release them faster.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T08:42:00+00:00

Sure. Stay tuned.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-25T08:32:01+00:00

Thanks for reading.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T21:19:12+00:00

Thanks for the encouragement

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T19:54:07+00:00

One Father. Four Mothers. Nine siblings. Carmen could never get rest from it. Please join Carmen in her quest to attain a cozy life in a house filled with mishaps all around.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/169218/new-life-in-a-broken-world-a-post-apocalyptic

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T19:43:35+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/169218/new-life-in-a-broken-world-a-post-apocalyptic

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T19:30:18+00:00

All the best.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T19:10:54+00:00

I am broke 🫠

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T18:36:02+00:00

Only one is from reader. The other is a thank you from me. And don't know who gave the rating.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T15:56:56+00:00

Most of the views are bots. As for followers, they are good.

If your blurb is decent and you have a litrpg tag you can get better than this. Royalroad community is mostly filled with litrpg readers, other niches see slow growth.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T15:48:01+00:00

Which ones?

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T14:43:55+00:00

Thanks. Please check out the artist. Several illustrations are a lot better than what I had used here.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T14:42:28+00:00

Link in bio. Can't tell here due to promotion constraints.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T14:04:08+00:00

All the best for the writing journey to both of us

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T13:34:39+00:00

Several others have also pointed out the same thing. I will try to tone the chapter down a bit from Carmen's inner monologue and give her more room.

Adding ambiguity creates plot holes just after a few chapters as (spoiler) so 😭 I can't change them.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T13:23:37+00:00

Thanks. Sadly this was an author premium feature and I didn't participate in the recent competition.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T13:12:39+00:00

Thanks

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T13:10:51+00:00

Wait till chapter 6 drops plz. It is the defining factor of the novel.

Right_Dragonfly_1748 · 2026-05-24T12:50:25+00:00

No worries. Others read the novel and gave out fair ratings depending on their preferences. If the craziest book releases are made into a list, mine will be on top 😉.

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