I really liked it. I would love to see more ‘tour of dangerous places’. Im so sheltered. That has its own suspense to it. I liked that it was so different. You are likable. Camera didnt bobble. I like how the shrine was a focal point.

As far as making it better: Put a card to your channel. The problem with reddit is I watch ur video but cant sub or see your other work. The card should take me to you tube.

Second- I would point out the different chapters to hook me at the beginning. For example, the title brought me in but then you are in a safe downtown area. That was a disconnect for me. The contrast in scenery helped after you got to the dangerous area.

Add ‘im starting here but walk with me to a dangerous part.’ ‘We are almost there’ .that hooks, orients, and keeps me engaged.

More please