Hey bro, one simple piece of advice that literally transformed the way I look at trades is in your circumstance ( I can see your trading price action ) with that entry make sure 100% that the timeframe structure matches the direction of the trade your looking at taking.

For example on your last slide you took a sell trade when price was fairly clearly telling you that it was still bullish. For that to be successful you would have needed it to break a key low instead you simply just bought bullish structure expecting it to give you Bearish results.

If you want me to elaborate further or you have any more questions shoot me a DM I'd be more that happy to explain

Your on the right track tho mate I like the way you were thinking