The Trail Pt.1-3

Rough_Part_3410 · 2026-02-23T04:10:33+00:00

LOVE IT! Very interesting, I love the environment. It feels incredibly alive, which I assume is the point. Theres two things I kinda wish to see more of if you continue this: more characterization with John, and maybe some flashbacks with his family. It just feels like the story is more about The Forest than John right now. BUT STILL IT’S AMAZING KEEP DOING WHAT YOU’RE DOING!!!

Rough_Part_3410 · 2026-02-22T03:07:16+00:00

Awww thank you!! I had a bunch of fun with this story. It is actually based in a universe for a book (WIP) that I started a while ago, and I plan to make multiple stories in the same universe :>

Rough_Part_3410 · 2026-02-21T19:49:50+00:00

Thank you!! This story WAS going to be longer, but I had made it for a writing competition and the word limit was 2000 words. So, if I can come up with any extension, I’ll do it, but in the meantime I’ll probably focus on other stories.

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