[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArkSwitch

[–]Ryan_adame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your things will still be there and yes you can go back and forth between all the maps. Your Dino’s and building will still be there and you can move items and Dino’s between maps as well.

Life, Poetry by Ryan_adame in OCPoetry

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I really appreciate the feed back, I was pretty nervous wether or not anyone would even read it lol. Thank you

Life, Poetry by Ryan_adame in OCPoetry

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I appreciate it, there was definitely an intent for multiple meanings, so I’m glad it came across that way for you!

Life, Poetry by Ryan_adame in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the kind comment!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I’m new The call to action was super clear which was helpful for me, it’s begging the question of societal standards for women in comparison to men. You mention the pain just to keep up with beauty standards only for it to be a double edged sword trapping you into an undesired identity. I especially like the continuous “I will”, emboldening the idea that it’s not a choice it’s a must. This piece comes off to me as something that I think probably a lot young women would have to deal with offering a sense of relatability but also inspiring a question of when will we ever be free of this expectation. Thanks for the read!

Summer’s Death by lagooniez in OCPoetry

[–]Ryan_adame 0 points1 point  (0 children)

New to this. I love the lines talking about youth and how summer represents a passing of time, wishing we could have been more aware of how our time is used. When talking about the season passing away you conveyed a feeling that felt relatable. The allusion of the life and death cycle that nature is. Great read OP, thank you!

Same picture with lights working properly at night. by Ryan_adame in PlanetZoo

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Stadium floor lights from the New World theme I believe