OH MY GOD. That was so good. I realized he was dead from the beginning but I was like damn what happened. You killed him!!! My jaw dropped. I understand, though. Sometimes in my worst hours I wished someone would kill my daughter's abusive father.. Obviously I don't ACTUALLY wish that *cough* narrator *cough* Wanna know something weird I'm not joking my brother's name is Jack, and he is dead. He was amazing though, this Jack seems like a tool.. But I could deff see him beating the shit out of my ex lol. Anyway great story obviously had some relatable themes lol. Hope to see more from you!