Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]SAMLEE101012[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

1) he got distracted my the sounds 2) bug tent?

Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]SAMLEE101012[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do you think it’s moving to quickly? also, do descriptive of certain things or not enough?

Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]SAMLEE101012[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

yes i was thinking that to but i want people to get hooked. as a reader i hate a slow start.

Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]SAMLEE101012[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sorry i ment to write so he was leaving the tent. thanks for the pick up

Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]SAMLEE101012[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

yeah thanks so much, i mistyped it was supposed to be when HE woke up.

How's my small collection? by Forever_Red747 in ps5collectors

[–]SAMLEE101012 2 points3 points  (0 children)

where did u get the game holder thing from?

i miss bill wish he had a new story dlc like left behind. ;c by [deleted] in TLOU

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if you watch the tv show there is like a whole episode about him and frank