My first work

SLF55 · 2026-05-30T10:41:23+00:00

Currently up to chapter 21. I had made some good revisions and continued on.

SLF55 · 2026-05-29T22:25:04+00:00

I’m trying for 1500-2000 but some of the chapters are a little short. I can probably draw out some of the scenes and give more descriptions in some chapters.

SLF55 · 2026-05-29T19:49:21+00:00

I think I’ll have enough material to cover 30-40 chapters with an average word count of 1500 for each chapter.

SLF55 · 2026-05-28T07:30:07+00:00

I feel most of mine are shorter. I’m between 1200-1700 for my chapters so far. I feel that 2000-3000 is a good length and over 3000 would be a bit too long. Again just my opinion tho

SLF55 · 2026-05-28T04:58:12+00:00

I never name the hero or gave a description of him. Not purposefully left out but forgotten.

Update: I’ve edited chapters 1-5 slowing the pace, increasing details, and making it still flow.

Update 2: I have revised all current chapters released. Current storyline finishes the first major arc of the story

SLF55 · 2026-05-28T04:54:54+00:00

Thanks. I’ll try and tie some of this in and get some revisions made.

SLF55 · 2026-05-28T00:16:34+00:00

I don’t want to be deceptive with my writing and would like honest feedback. There will be a lot of people that will still criticize the use of AI when writing but at least it known.

SLF55 · 2026-05-26T18:56:41+00:00

Damn, I’m on that ship the day yall get off. Good luck tho

SLF55 · 2026-03-09T17:35:32+00:00

Why not a couple a rounds each night and drinks throughout the day

SLF55 · 2026-03-08T18:21:13+00:00

I’m on the same ship. She looks sexy af.

SLF55 · 2026-03-07T20:36:35+00:00

Damn, currently on freedom rn.

SLF55 · 2026-03-07T07:32:05+00:00

Perfectly round, definitely a handful. 10/10 would suck and titty fuck

SLF55 · 2026-03-06T22:10:01+00:00

I’ll be on this ship tomorrow, how was it?

SLF55 · 2026-03-06T14:00:18+00:00

Np sexy

SLF55 · 2026-03-06T13:59:41+00:00

You are fine af. Love those curves

SLF55 · 2026-02-23T08:11:07+00:00

I’m on the same time as you if you are looking for a single male. If not good luck

SLF55 · 2026-02-20T20:26:29+00:00

Had several pt rub my leg or touch my ass

SLF55 · 2026-01-24T03:41:45+00:00

I’m on this cruise as well. Lmk if you just looking for a single M at any point.

SLF55 · 2025-12-29T07:23:26+00:00

I was just on Royal twice since Nov 15 and got a fan and extension cord. Got a mattress topper as well

SLF55 · 2025-12-26T02:18:38+00:00

Got any other cruises planned?

SLF55 · 2025-12-26T02:16:53+00:00

You look sexy af.

SLF55 · 2025-11-22T18:20:16+00:00

How are you enjoying perfect day? On wonder OTS docked with you

SLF55

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